Bug 203340
| Summary: | Minor Clarity Improvement to Section 17.14.3.1 | ||||||
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| Product: | Documentation | Reporter: | mwalker1025 | ||||
| Component: | Books & Articles | Assignee: | freebsd-doc (Nobody) <doc> | ||||
| Status: | Closed FIXED | ||||||
| Severity: | Affects Only Me | CC: | bcr | ||||
| Priority: | --- | Keywords: | patch | ||||
| Version: | Latest | ||||||
| Hardware: | Any | ||||||
| OS: | Any | ||||||
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A commit references this bug: Author: allanjude Date: Sun Sep 27 21:56:03 UTC 2015 New revision: 47445 URL: https://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/47445 Log: Improve the instructions in the HAST section of the handbook PR: 203340 Submitted by: mwalker1025@gmail.com Approved by: bcr (mentor) Sponsored by: EuroBSDCon DevSummit Changes: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/disks/chapter.xml |
Created attachment 161390 [details] I hope I did this properly. An extremely minor clarity quibble, regarding the phrasing of one sentence of documentation found in section 17.14.3.1: Recovering from the Split-brain Condition. The original is: "The administrator must decide which node has more important changes or merge them manually." I would rather state the sentence as: "The administrator must either decide which node has more important changes, or perform the merge manually." The attached .patch file contains the change as stated here, assuming that I generated it correctly.