Bug 203350

Summary: Typo in handbook jails page
Product: Documentation Reporter: Leonhard Campo <campol2>
Component: Books & ArticlesAssignee: Allan Jude <allanjude>
Status: Closed FIXED    
Severity: Affects Many People CC: allanjude
Priority: --- Keywords: patch
Version: Latest   
Hardware: Any   
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Description Leonhard Campo 2015-09-25 19:09:23 UTC 
Created attachment 161401 [details]
SVN .diff file of the edits made to chapter.xml

There is a sentence with a typo/bad grammar in the Jails section of the handbook.

At this link https://www.freebsd.org/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/jails.html#jails-synopsis there is a sentence that reads:

This chapter provides an overview of jail terminology are how to use FreeBSD jails.


This can be better written as:

This chapter provides an overview of jail terminology for use with 
FreeBSD jails.

Attached is an SVN .diff file with the proposed fix.
Comment 1 commit-hook freebsd_committer freebsd_triage 2015-09-27 21:33:27 UTC 
A commit references this bug:

Author: allanjude
Date: Sun Sep 27 21:32:58 UTC 2015
New revision: 47442
URL: https://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/47442

Log:
  Fix grammar in the jails handbook section

  PR:		203350
  Submitted by:	Leonhard Campo <campol2@rpi.edu>
  Approved by:	bcr (mentor)
  Sponsored by:	ScaleEngine Inc.
  Sponsored by:	EuroBSDCon DevSummit

Changes:
  head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/jails/chapter.xml
Comment 2 Allan Jude freebsd_committer freebsd_triage 2015-09-27 21:35:19 UTC 
A modified version ofyYour change has been committed and should appear on the website within an hour