Bug 204704

Summary: [patch] Typos in website at /features.html
Product: Documentation Reporter: scottcheloha
Component: WebsiteAssignee: freebsd-doc (Nobody) <doc>
Status: Closed FIXED    
Severity: Affects Many People CC: brueffer
Priority: --- Keywords: patch
Version: Latest   
Hardware: Any   
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Description scottcheloha 2015-11-20 18:09:57 UTC 
Created attachment 163358 [details]
patch for typo fixes

Some misc. typos at http://www.freebsd.org/features.html:

While "world-wide" is acceptable, "worldwide" is preferred.

"introduced" should be "introduces" in order to maintain present tense with "replaces."

"These allow" seems awkward.  Why not, "Together, they provide"?

"ABI preserving" should be "ABI-preserving."
Comment 1 commit-hook freebsd_committer freebsd_triage 2015-12-15 18:17:22 UTC 
A commit references this bug:

Author: brueffer
Date: Tue Dec 15 18:16:48 UTC 2015
New revision: 47864
URL: https://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/47864

Log:
  Several minor wording, spelling and grammar improvements.

  PR:		204704
  Submitted by:	scottcheloha@gmail.com

Changes:
  head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/features.xml
Comment 2 Christian Brueffer freebsd_committer freebsd_triage 2015-12-15 18:21:05 UTC 
Committed, thanks!