Bug 207321

Summary: Just a simple grammatical error
Product: Documentation Reporter: mukul.surajiwale
Component: Books & ArticlesAssignee: Jason Helfman <jgh>
Status: Closed FIXED    
Severity: Affects Many People CC: bjk, jgh, wblock
Priority: ---    
Version: Latest   
Hardware: Any   
OS: Any   
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Description mukul.surajiwale 2016-02-19 04:05:14 UTC
Created attachment 167161 [details]
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The there should be no ',' in the sentence on line 24. The clause after the comma is not a complete sentence.
Comment 1 Warren Block freebsd_committer freebsd_triage 2016-02-19 04:49:02 UTC
Without a full path, it's a little difficult to identify the exact location of this file.  I disagree about the comma, the sentence needs a pause there.  Finally, this appears to be Subversion code that would need to be modified by the upstream project to have a lasting effect.
Comment 2 Benjamin Kaduk freebsd_committer freebsd_triage 2016-02-19 17:05:38 UTC
(I agree with Warren, and was going to close the bug as WONTFIX if jgh had not grabbed it.)
Comment 3 Jason Helfman freebsd_committer freebsd_triage 2016-03-01 22:17:52 UTC
Timeout.

Please re-open with more context as to where this change is in the documentation tree. A full path is something that would be helpful in locating the document that needs addressing.