Bug 218069

Summary: Small Typos in Introduction Chapters in Handbook
Product: Documentation Reporter: Daniel Petti <djpetti>
Component: Books & ArticlesAssignee: freebsd-doc (Nobody) <doc>
Status: Closed FIXED    
Severity: Affects Only Me CC: brd
Priority: --- Keywords: patch
Version: Latest   
Hardware: Any   
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The diff file for the chapter that I changed. none

Description Daniel Petti 2017-03-24 17:00:18 UTC 
Created attachment 181145 [details]
The diff file for the chapter that I changed.

In the introduction chapter of the Handbook, particularly, under the list of companies that use FreeBSD, there seem to be some small typos.

First of all, the Stormshield section is written in the first person, which does not seem correct.

Second, the Weather Channel section is missing an apostrophe.

I've included a diff of the chapter.xml file for the introduction which fixes the problem.

Furthermore, here is a link to the relevant page:

https://www.freebsd.org/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/nutshell.html
Comment 1 commit-hook freebsd_committer freebsd_triage 2017-04-09 00:49:05 UTC 
A commit references this bug:

Author: brd
Date: Sun Apr  9 00:48:25 UTC 2017
New revision: 50139
URL: https://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/50139

Log:
  Fix some grammer and a missing apostrophe.

  PR:		218069
  Submitted by:	Daniel Petti <djpetti@me.com>

Changes:
  head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/introduction/chapter.xml
Comment 2 Brad Davis freebsd_committer freebsd_triage 2017-04-09 00:50:31 UTC 
Committed, thanks for the submission!

In the future please provide the full path when creating the diff, i.e. from the root of the svn checkout run `svn diff head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/introduction/chapter.xml'