Bug 223679

Summary: Minor Style Guide Violation in Section 8.8 of FAQ
Product: Documentation Reporter: Michael Pagano <mikepagano113>
Component: Books & ArticlesAssignee: freebsd-doc (Nobody) <doc>
Status: Closed FIXED    
Severity: Affects Only Me CC: carlavilla
Priority: --- Keywords: patch
Version: Latest   
Hardware: Any   
OS: Any   
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Description Michael Pagano 2017-11-15 10:58:23 UTC 
Created attachment 188012 [details]
This is a diff file fixing this bug.

Section 8.8 of the FAQ features the word "you" to direct the user. This is incorrect form.
https://www.freebsd.org/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/faq/disks.html#idp59472104

The original line read "You can then boot LILO from BootEasy." However, a better way to express the line would be "Then boot LILO from BootEasy."
Comment 1 commit-hook freebsd_committer freebsd_triage 2020-01-25 19:19:57 UTC 
A commit references this bug:

Author: carlavilla
Date: Sat Jan 25 19:19:19 UTC 2020
New revision: 53817
URL: https://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/53817

Log:
  Minor Style Guide Corrections in the FAQ and freebsd-questions article

  PR:		223679
  Submitted by:	mikepagano113@gmail.com
  Approved by:	bcr@(mentor)
  Differential Revision:	https://reviews.freebsd.org/D23361

Changes:
  head/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/freebsd-questions/article.xml
  head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/faq/book.xml
Comment 2 Sergio Carlavilla Delgado freebsd_committer freebsd_triage 2020-01-25 19:24:01 UTC 
Fixed. Thanks!