Bug 224531

Summary: FDP Primer, text reads "working of documentation"
Product: Documentation Reporter: ljuba.bsd
Component: Books & ArticlesAssignee: freebsd-doc (Nobody) <doc>
Status: Closed FIXED    
Severity: Affects Many People    
Priority: ---    
Version: Latest   
Hardware: Any   
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FDP Primer, Chapter 1, Section 1.1 Overview improvement. none

Description ljuba.bsd 2017-12-22 23:11:33 UTC
Created attachment 189043 [details]
FDP Primer, Chapter 1, Section 1.1 Overview improvement.

FDP Primer, Chapter 1, Section 1.1 Overview contains a sentence "The Subversion package is needed to obtain a working of the documentation and generate patches with." which should be "The Subversion package is needed to obtain a working copy of the documentation and generate patches with."

Other changes included in diff are merely cleaning up badly formed lines to make _igor_ silent.

Proposed changes are tested locally, build works as expected.

-ljuba
Comment 1 commit-hook freebsd_committer freebsd_triage 2017-12-23 01:20:35 UTC
A commit references this bug:

Author: eadler
Date: Sat Dec 23 01:19:44 UTC 2017
New revision: 51332
URL: https://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/51332

Log:
  FDP Primer: add missing word; pet igor

  PR:		224531
  Submitted by:	ljuba.bsd@gmail.com

Changes:
  head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/overview/chapter.xml