Bug 240656

Summary: Section 5.8.1 of the FreeBSD Handbook
Product: Documentation Reporter: Pau Amma <pauamma>
Component: WebsiteAssignee: Jason Helfman <jgh>
Status: Closed FIXED    
Severity: Affects Only Me CC: bcr, jgh
Priority: ---    
Version: Latest   
Hardware: Any   
OS: Any   
URL: https://www.freebsd.org/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/x-compiz-fusion.html

Description Pau Amma 2019-09-18 02:24:10 UTC
In the note at the end of that section, "the some versions of Xorg" should be "some versions of Xorg".
Comment 1 commit-hook freebsd_committer freebsd_triage 2019-09-18 08:05:17 UTC
A commit references this bug:

Author: bcr
Date: Wed Sep 18 08:05:03 UTC 2019
New revision: 53418
URL: https://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/53418

Log:
  Fix wording which was wrong ("the some") and
  remove another superfluous word in the same
  sentence while here.  Put a sentence stop after
  the command to split this long sentence into two.

  PR:		    240656
  Submitted by:	    pauamma@gundo.com

Changes:
  head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/x11/chapter.xml
Comment 2 Benedict Reuschling freebsd_committer freebsd_triage 2019-09-18 08:06:24 UTC
Thanks for submitting that. I fixed the sentence a bit more, split it in two and committed it. PR closed!