Bug 241674
| Summary: | Spurious comma in FreeBSD Handbook section 11.5.2 | ||||||
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| Product: | Documentation | Reporter: | Pau Amma <pauamma> | ||||
| Component: | Books & Articles | Assignee: | Chris Rees <crees> | ||||
| Status: | Closed FIXED | ||||||
| Severity: | Affects Only Me | CC: | crees | ||||
| Priority: | --- | Keywords: | patch | ||||
| Version: | Latest | ||||||
| Hardware: | Any | ||||||
| OS: | Any | ||||||
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Committed, thanks! A commit references this bug: Author: crees Date: Wed Dec 4 11:53:13 UTC 2019 New revision: 53655 URL: https://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/53655 Log: Simplify language by removing spurious comma. While here, "must" conjugates with plural as well as singular. PR: docs/241674 Submitted by: PauAmma <pauamma@gundo.com> Reviewed by: bcr (first point) Differential Revision: https://reviews.freebsd.org/D22648 Changes: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/config/chapter.xml |
Created attachment 208801 [details] Remove spurious comma and while I'm at it, simplify language a bit. Tested with lynx.