Bug 279481

Summary: Grammar in Handbook section on ZFS snapshot rollback
Product: Documentation Reporter: Neil Tremble <ntremble>
Component: Books & ArticlesAssignee: freebsd-doc (Nobody) <doc>
Status: Closed FIXED    
Severity: Affects Many People CC: bcr
Priority: ---    
Version: Latest   
Hardware: Any   
OS: Any   

Description Neil Tremble 2024-06-03 00:15:23 UTC 
FreeBSD Handbook Section 22.4.5.3 ZFS Snapshot Rollback

Current:
"Most often this is the case when the current state of the dataset is no longer and if preferring an older version."

Suggested:
"Most often this is the case when the current state of the dataset is no longer valid, or an older version is preferred.

And further down in the same section, next paragraph:
Current:
"In the first example, roll back a snapshot because of a careless rm operation that removes too much data than intended."

Suggested:
"In the first example, roll back a snapshot because a careless rm operation removed more data than intended."
Comment 1 commit-hook freebsd_committer freebsd_triage 2024-06-30 14:31:00 UTC 
A commit in branch main references this bug:

URL: https://cgit.FreeBSD.org/doc/commit/?id=e077ac9ac197b8836c41d2644c29e7c85d7bb904

commit e077ac9ac197b8836c41d2644c29e7c85d7bb904
Author:     Benedict Reuschling <bcr@FreeBSD.org>
AuthorDate: 2024-06-30 14:29:23 +0000
Commit:     Benedict Reuschling <bcr@FreeBSD.org>
CommitDate: 2024-06-30 14:29:23 +0000

    Fix grammar in ZFS handbook chapter, rollback section

    Submitted by:   ntremble@gmail.com
    PR:             279481

 documentation/content/en/books/handbook/zfs/_index.adoc | 4 ++--
 1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-)
Comment 2 Benedict Reuschling freebsd_committer freebsd_triage 2024-06-30 14:31:40 UTC 
I've committed a patch based on your suggestions. Thanks for reporting it! PR closed.