| Summary: | Mark Up changes for chapter Configuration and Tuning | ||||||
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| Product: | Documentation | Reporter: | mheinen0 <mheinen0> | ||||
| Component: | Books & Articles | Assignee: | freebsd-doc (Nobody) <doc> | ||||
| Status: | Closed FIXED | ||||||
| Severity: | Affects Only Me | ||||||
| Priority: | Normal | ||||||
| Version: | Latest | ||||||
| Hardware: | Any | ||||||
| OS: | Any | ||||||
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Description
mheinen0
2001-08-09 17:10:01 UTC
Martin Heinen <mheinen0@wiesbaden-online.de> writes: > >Description: > > additional files marked up with <filename>, > replaced literal " with <quote>, > marked up root as user, > changed fxp0 to show up as device, > replaced bind with &man.named.8;, > marked up syslog, ppp as <command> Great! Put please submit this in the form of a unified diff, and don't indent it. The former will make it easier to read, and the latter will make it possible to apply. Thanks. On Thu, Aug 09, 2001 at 10:28:47AM -0700, Dima Dorfman wrote:
> Great! Put please submit this in the form of a unified diff, and
> don't indent it. The former will make it easier to read, and the
> latter will make it possible to apply.
Sorry for the inconvenience, I attached a unified diff against
1.13.
Martin
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Marxpitn
Martin Heinen <mheinen0@wiesbaden-online.de> writes: > <row> > <entry><filename>/etc/ppp</filename></entry> > - <entry>Configuration for both user- and kernel-ppp programs. > + <entry>Configuration for both user- and > + kernel-<command>ppp</command> programs. > </entry> This isn't right, because it isn't talking about ppp(8) specifically. > @@ -743,8 +754,9 @@ > <screen>&prompt.root; <userinput>sysctl kern.maxfiles=5000</userinput> > kern.maxfiles: 2088 -> 5000</screen> > > - <para>Settings of sysctl variables are usually either strings, numbers, > - or booleans. A boolean being 1 for yes or a 0 for no.</para> > + <para>Settings of &man.sysctl.8; variables are usually either strings, Changing sysctl -> sysctl.8 seems wrong, since that command isn't the only way to set sysctl variables. Besides, there's concern with overusing the man page entities. Other than that, the patch looks good. I'll apply it shortly. State Changed From-To: open->closed Applied, thanks! |