Bug 29852

Summary: Two mistypings in fdp-primer
Product: Documentation Reporter: Vladimir Tchoukharev <chu>
Component: Books & ArticlesAssignee: freebsd-doc (Nobody) <doc>
Status: Closed FIXED    
Severity: Affects Only Me    
Priority: Normal    
Version: Latest   
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Description Vladimir Tchoukharev 2001-08-18 21:10:00 UTC
	In the patch below I try to correct two minor errors I faced.
Comment 1 dima 2001-08-20 00:56:30 UTC
Vladimir Tchoukharev <chu@h33.erkki.ton.tut.fi> writes:
> --- /usr/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/doc-build/chapter.sgml.orig
> 	Sat Aug 18 22:47:06 2001
> +++ /usr/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/doc-build/chapter.sgml	Sat Aug
>  18 22:47:13 2001
> @@ -130,7 +130,7 @@
>      </itemizedlist>
>  
>      <para><application>Make</application> syntax is quickly revised as
> -      the we explore these types.</para>
> +      then we explore these types.</para>

I can't make sense out of this paragraph before or after the change.
This document doesn't revise make(1) syntax!  Unless somebody can
figure out what it's trying to say, I'm going to nuke it in a few
days.  It doesn't seem to serve any useful purpose.

>      <sect2 id="sub-make">
>        <title>Subdirectory Makefiles</title>
> --- /usr/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/the-website/chapter.sgml.orig
> 	Sat Aug 18 22:43:17 2001
> +++ /usr/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/the-website/chapter.sgml
> 	Sat Aug 18 22:43:27 2001
> @@ -77,7 +77,7 @@
>  	  space.</para>
>  	
>  	<screen>&prompt.root; <userinput>mkdir /var/tmp/webbuild</userinput>
> -&prompt.root; <userinput>cd /var/tmp/webuild</userinput></screen>
> +&prompt.root; <userinput>cd /var/tmp/webbuild</userinput></screen>

This I've fixed, thanks!
Comment 2 dd freebsd_committer freebsd_triage 2001-08-23 22:23:07 UTC
State Changed
From-To: open->closed

All issues resolved, thanks!