Bug 32679

Summary: Kernel Config chapter could use touching up
Product: Documentation Reporter: darklogik <darklogik>
Component: Books & ArticlesAssignee: Murray Stokely <murray>
Status: Closed FIXED    
Severity: Affects Only Me    
Priority: Normal    
Version: Latest   
Hardware: Any   
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Description darklogik 2001-12-10 18:50:01 UTC 
Handbook, Kernel config could use improvement

Fix: Read this patch, if you like it, commit it, if you don't, edit or complain to me



How-To-Repeat: Read, pretent your new, and ask youself "what if" and "could I"
Comment 1 Murray Stokely freebsd_committer freebsd_triage 2001-12-11 06:45:55 UTC 
On Mon, Dec 10, 2001 at 01:42:31PM -0500, Tom Rhodes wrote:
> Read this patch, if you like it, commit it, if you don't, edit or complain to me

  Thanks for taking the time to do this.  I modified your patch and
committed about half of it.  There were several problems.

* It didn't even build, there were many structural problems.  Please
  test future patches before submitting, if you can.

* There were many typos, in words and in SGML tags.

* Your <screen> sections are all messed up, actually building the SGML
  that you write is essential to make sure it looks OK.

* There were some whitespace problems with the way you indented
  paragraphs and such, please follow the standard way to do this
  described in the Doc Primer.

* The part about INCLUDE_CONFIG and the reference to it in the
  previous section were akward but I couldn't immediately find a
  better place to stick this information.  If you can submit another
  patch with this stuff then it will be much easier to review
  (especially if you take care of the above). ;)

Thanks for the submission!

       - Murray
Comment 2 Murray Stokely freebsd_committer freebsd_triage 2001-12-11 06:46:03 UTC 
State Changed
From-To: open->feedback

Most of this patch has been committed.  Awaiting an updated patch from 
the submitter for the remaining part.
Comment 3 Murray Stokely freebsd_committer freebsd_triage 2001-12-11 06:46:03 UTC 
Responsible Changed
From-To: freebsd-doc->murray

I'll follow up on this.
Comment 4 Murray Stokely freebsd_committer freebsd_triage 2001-12-20 11:42:33 UTC 
State Changed
From-To: feedback->closed

Please supply an updated patch for the remaining changes.  Thanks for 
your continued interest in helping us out!