Bug 34328
| Summary: | [PATCH] minor corrections to chapter kernelconfig | ||||||
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| Product: | Documentation | Reporter: | Martin Heinen <martin> | ||||
| Component: | Books & Articles | Assignee: | freebsd-doc (Nobody) <doc> | ||||
| Status: | Closed FIXED | ||||||
| Severity: | Affects Only Me | ||||||
| Priority: | Normal | ||||||
| Version: | Latest | ||||||
| Hardware: | Any | ||||||
| OS: | Any | ||||||
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Recently looking this over, we have 2 prs for the kernelconfig chapter, they will cancell each other out in line variances, and i'm going to combine them... I see your logic in this, but I will point out a few things that I don't agree with: you have: <command>vi</command> and <command>ee</command> which will work, yes, but the sentence does not push the user to look at a command, in hence, it sounds more like you want to refer to a utility or application. The new patch will hug vi and ee in the <application> tags. You have <command>make world</command> when the FDP primer requests the use of <maketarget> as "make world" is more of a target. Some of your other ideas I agree with, mainly the grammer, but I will submit a patch with your changes, my changes and cover pr: 34137 in it... Thanks for pointing these out! -- Tom (Darklogik) Rhodes www.Pittgoth.com Gothic Liberation Front www.FreeBSD.org The Power To Serve State Changed From-To: open->closed Closed by docs/34499. |
removed a blank, removed <filename> from <userinput> line, marked up root with <username>, put 'ee', 'make world' inside <command>, added missing periods, made Star Office an application, marked up enter with <keycap> How-To-Repeat: read the kernelconfig chapter