Bug 35688
| Summary: | fdisk(8) page extraneous "being", etc. | ||
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| Product: | Documentation | Reporter: | Gary W. Swearingen <swear> |
| Component: | Books & Articles | Assignee: | Tom Rhodes <trhodes> |
| Status: | Closed FIXED | ||
| Severity: | Affects Only Me | ||
| Priority: | Normal | ||
| Version: | Latest | ||
| Hardware: | Any | ||
| OS: | Any | ||
Responsible Changed From-To: freebsd-doc->trhodes I shall handle this one also, thanks for pointing this out Gary. State Changed From-To: open->patched Patched in CURRENT waiting for MFC. State Changed From-To: patched->closed Committed to -stable. Thanks! |
The man page has several minor problems. See below. ================ Fix: -- Change: If omitted, the disks 'ad0', and 'da0' are being searched in that order, until one is being found responding. To: If omitted, the disks 'ad0' and 'da0' are searched in that order until one responds. -- Change "program fdisk" to "fdisk program" or "program, fdisk,". -- Change "purposes" to "purposes.". -- Change "designed not to" to "designed to not". -- Change "FreeBSD; and" to "FreeBSD and". -- For -I, change "with one" to "for one". -- Change "setup" to "set up" (it's not used as a noun here). -- Change all "partition" to "slice", except in the sample output. FreeBSD should either use "slice" everywhere or conform to the more common usage, eg, "primary partition" everywhere and stop using "slice". From "Bugs", remove: Throughout this man page, the term 'partition' is used where it should actually be 'slice', in order to conform with the terms used elsewhere. How-To-Repeat: n/a ================