Bug 38525

Summary: Documentation error in preface of handbook.
Product: Documentation Reporter: Arthur Munn <amunn>
Component: Books & ArticlesAssignee: Giorgos Keramidas <keramida>
Status: Closed FIXED    
Severity: Affects Only Me    
Priority: Normal    
Version: Latest   
Hardware: Any   
OS: Any   

Description Arthur Munn 2002-05-24 23:30:01 UTC 
Early in the preface, the handbook introduction is described as:
 "Introduces FreeBSD to a new user. It describes the history of the
  FreeBSD Project, the goals, development model, and everything they've
  done for the FreeBSD project."

As far as I can tell, the introduction of the handbook describes all of those things, except what the FreeBSD Project has done for the FreeBSD Project. So my fix just removes:
 "and everything they've done for the FreeBSD project"
and cleans up the remaining text.

Also, if you are handling this ceri, notice that I was able to get rid of a contraction with this fix as well. :-)

Fix: 

<   <para>Introduces FreeBSD to a new user. It describes the history of 
<   the FreeBSD Project, the goals, development model, and everything else <   they've done for the FreeBSD project.</para>
---
>   <para>Introduces FreeBSD to a new user. Describes the history of the 
>   FreeBSD Project. its goals, and development model.</para>
Comment 1 Giorgos Keramidas freebsd_committer freebsd_triage 2002-05-26 00:08:26 UTC 
State Changed
From-To: open->closed

The changes have been committed.  Soon they should appear at the web 
site (within 12 or 24 hours max).  Thank you ;)
Comment 2 Giorgos Keramidas freebsd_committer freebsd_triage 2002-05-26 00:08:26 UTC 
Responsible Changed
From-To: freebsd-doc->keramida