Bug 40910

Summary: [PATCH] Typos & grammer fixes for /usr/share/man/man8/moused.8.gz
Product: Documentation Reporter: Chris Pepper <pepper>
Component: Books & ArticlesAssignee: Christian Brueffer <brueffer>
Status: Closed FIXED    
Severity: Affects Only Me    
Priority: Normal    
Version: Latest   
Hardware: Any   
OS: Any   
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Description Chris Pepper 2002-07-23 04:00:02 UTC 
	The moused man page has typos & grammar errors.

Fix: Apply this patch.
How-To-Repeat: 	man moused
Comment 1 parv 2002-07-23 05:42:38 UTC 
in message <20020723025201.639C7A970@guest.reppep.com>,
wrote Chris Pepper thusly...
>
> >Number:         40910
> >Category:       docs
> >Synopsis:       [PATCH] Typos & grammer fixes for /usr/share/man/man8/moused.8.gz
...
> -Note also that some mice think left is the negative horizontal direction,
> +Note also that some mice think left is the negative horizontal direction;
>  others may think otherwise.

that semicolon instead of comma seems excessive.


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Comment 2 Ceri Davies freebsd_committer freebsd_triage 2002-07-23 10:07:20 UTC 
On Mon, Jul 22, 2002 at 10:52:01PM -0400, Chris Pepper said:
> 	
> >Description:
> 	The moused man page has typos & grammar errors.

Hi Chris,

Just two comments on this patch.

>  If the mouse daemon receives the signal
>  .Dv SIGHUP ,
> -it will reopen the mouse port and reinitializes itself.
> -Useful if
> +it reopens the mouse port and reinitializes itself.
> +This is useful if
>  the mouse is attached/detached while the system is suspended.

I'd prefer :

 If the mouse daemon receives the signal
 .Dv SIGHUP ,
 -it will reopen the mouse port and reinitializes itself.
 -Useful if
 +it will reopen the mouse port and reinitialize itself.
 +This is useful if

Comments ?

Everything else in this PR looks good to me.

Ceri
Comment 3 Christian Brueffer freebsd_committer freebsd_triage 2003-04-22 10:22:16 UTC 
Responsible Changed
From-To: freebsd-doc->brueffer

I'll take care of this
Comment 4 Christian Brueffer freebsd_committer freebsd_triage 2003-04-25 23:31:23 UTC 
State Changed
From-To: open->patched

Some parts of the patch were already fixed, the rest has been applied. 
Thanks!
Comment 5 Christian Brueffer freebsd_committer freebsd_triage 2003-04-28 09:34:21 UTC 
State Changed
From-To: patched->closed

MFC done.