Bug 42715

Summary: More fixups to USENIX Summit document
Product: Documentation Reporter: dominic_marks <dominic_marks>
Component: Books & ArticlesAssignee: freebsd-doc (Nobody) <doc>
Status: Closed FIXED    
Severity: Affects Only Me CC: jim
Priority: Normal    
Version: Latest   
Hardware: Any   
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Description dominic_marks 2002-09-12 22:10:00 UTC 
	Correct some more naming problems:

	Jeffrey Xu -> Jeffrey Hsu
	Jennifer Ying -> Jennifer Yang
	MIps -> MIPs (I believe this is the common usage ?)

	A number of problems I introduced in my previous PR. Mass replace
	considered evil:

	Adillion64 -> AMD64
	alcPCI -> ACPI
	samIDE -> SLIDE

	A few changes which make things clearer, rather than saying: "PCI
	PCI" when talking about ACPI, which can look like a typo, I've
	used: "PCI<->PCI".

	A few whitespace fixes while I'm here, plus wrapping a very long
	line.
	
	Put doc as category this time since Jim reccomended it. Who will win
	the CC'ed committer race? :-)

How-To-Repeat: 	NA.
Comment 1 setantae 2002-09-12 22:15:14 UTC 
On Thu, Sep 12, 2002 at 10:10:08PM +0100, Dominic Marks wrote:
>  
> -<p><strong class="speaker">jhb</strong> : Jefferey Xu and Jennifer Ying
> +<p><strong class="speaker">jhb</strong> : Jefferey Hsu and Jennifer Yang

{setantae@rhadamanth}-{~} $ finger hsu@freebsd.org
[freebsd.org]
Login: hsu                              Name: Jeffrey Hsu

No chocolate watch this time, I'm afraid.

Ceri

-- 
you can't see when light's so strong
you can't see when light is gone
Comment 2 setantae 2002-09-12 22:16:53 UTC 
On Thu, Sep 12, 2002 at 10:10:08PM +0100, Dominic Marks wrote:

> 	A few whitespace fixes while I'm here, plus wrapping a very long
> 	line.

Could you put these in a separate patch ?
We have to commit whitespace separately to avoid making the translation teams
insane.

Thanks,

Ceri

-- 
you can't see when light's so strong
you can't see when light is gone
Comment 3 dominic_marks 2002-09-12 22:24:06 UTC 
On Thu, Sep 12, 2002 at 10:15:14PM +0100, Ceri Davies wrote:
> On Thu, Sep 12, 2002 at 10:10:08PM +0100, Dominic Marks wrote:
> >  
> > -<p><strong class="speaker">jhb</strong> : Jefferey Xu and Jennifer Ying
> > +<p><strong class="speaker">jhb</strong> : Jefferey Hsu and Jennifer Yang
> 
> {setantae@rhadamanth}-{~} $ finger hsu@freebsd.org
> [freebsd.org]
> Login: hsu                              Name: Jeffrey Hsu

I don't understand your point ? :)

> No chocolate watch this time, I'm afraid.
> 
> Ceri
> 
> -- 
> you can't see when light's so strong
> you can't see when light is gone

-- 
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Comment 4 dominic_marks 2002-09-12 22:25:01 UTC 
On Thu, Sep 12, 2002 at 10:16:53PM +0100, Ceri Davies wrote:
> On Thu, Sep 12, 2002 at 10:10:08PM +0100, Dominic Marks wrote:
> 
> > 	A few whitespace fixes while I'm here, plus wrapping a very long
> > 	line.
> 
> Could you put these in a separate patch ?
> We have to commit whitespace separately to avoid making the translation teams
> insane.

I'm talking to Marc at the moment, I think he's handling some
post-processing before a commit. (Whitespace for translations and such).

> Thanks,
> 
> Ceri
> 
> -- 
> you can't see when light's so strong
> you can't see when light is gone

Thanks!
-- 
Dominic Marks
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Comment 5 setantae 2002-09-12 22:34:32 UTC 
On Thu, Sep 12, 2002 at 10:24:06PM +0100, Dominic Marks wrote:
> On Thu, Sep 12, 2002 at 10:15:14PM +0100, Ceri Davies wrote:
> > On Thu, Sep 12, 2002 at 10:10:08PM +0100, Dominic Marks wrote:
> > >  
> > > -<p><strong class="speaker">jhb</strong> : Jefferey Xu and Jennifer Ying
> > > +<p><strong class="speaker">jhb</strong> : Jefferey Hsu and Jennifer Yang
> > 
> > {setantae@rhadamanth}-{~} $ finger hsu@freebsd.org
> > [freebsd.org]
> > Login: hsu                              Name: Jeffrey Hsu
> 
> I don't understand your point ? :)

It's Jeffrey, not Jefferey.

Ceri

-- 
you can't see when light's so strong
you can't see when light is gone
Comment 6 dominic_marks 2002-09-12 22:35:22 UTC 
On Thu, Sep 12, 2002 at 10:15:14PM +0100, Ceri Davies wrote:
> On Thu, Sep 12, 2002 at 10:10:08PM +0100, Dominic Marks wrote:
> >  
> > -<p><strong class="speaker">jhb</strong> : Jefferey Xu and Jennifer Ying
> > +<p><strong class="speaker">jhb</strong> : Jefferey Hsu and Jennifer Yang
> 
> {setantae@rhadamanth}-{~} $ finger hsu@freebsd.org
> [freebsd.org]
> Login: hsu                              Name: Jeffrey Hsu
> 
> No chocolate watch this time, I'm afraid.

I see, another typo I missed :-)

Looking again there is another problem in the list of attendees, an
instance of Jeffery, which should of course be, Jeffrey. You want a
patch for this one ?

> Ceri
> 
> -- 
> you can't see when light's so strong
> you can't see when light is gone

Thanks!
-- 
Dominic Marks
 Computer & Politics Geek
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Comment 7 Marc Fonvieille freebsd_committer freebsd_triage 2002-09-12 22:57:41 UTC 
State Changed
From-To: open->closed

Committed in 2 patches, thanks :)