Bug 43790

Summary: Grammatical error in en_US.ISO8859-1 handbook (Synopsis section of introduction)
Product: Documentation Reporter: Matt Mills <matt_mills>
Component: Books & ArticlesAssignee: Ceri Davies <ceri>
Status: Closed FIXED    
Severity: Affects Only Me    
Priority: Normal    
Version: Latest   
Hardware: Any   
OS: Any   

Description Matt Mills 2002-10-07 21:20:01 UTC 
Taken from a very recent CVSup, the sentence, "The following chapter covers various items about the FreeBSD Project, such as its history, goals, development model, and so on." seems a little incorrect to me.

Fix: 

Perhaps, "The following chapter covers various areas of the FreeBSD Project, such as its history, goals, development model, and so on." would be more suitable.
How-To-Repeat: Refer to introduction (Synopsis) section of the handbook.
Comment 1 Ceri Davies freebsd_committer freebsd_triage 2002-10-08 17:27:10 UTC 
State Changed
From-To: open->analyzed

This looks good.
Comment 2 Ceri Davies freebsd_committer freebsd_triage 2002-10-08 17:27:10 UTC 
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From-To: freebsd-doc->ceri

I'll look after this one.
Comment 3 Ceri Davies freebsd_committer freebsd_triage 2002-10-14 20:23:55 UTC 
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From-To: analyzed->closed

A slightly different version of your suggestion was committed. 
Thanks for your submission!