Bug 50665

Summary:	Handbook 19.4.5 uses 1st person
Product:	Documentation	Reporter:	Murray Stokely <murray>
Component:	Books & Articles	Assignee:	freebsd-doc (Nobody) <doc>
Status:	Closed FIXED
Severity:	Affects Only Me
Priority:	Normal
Version:	Latest
Hardware:	Any
OS:	Any

Description Murray Stokely freebsd_committer

2003-04-07 10:00:31 UTC

The Advanced Networking : Bridging : Performance section includes an
outdated performance antecdote written in the first person.  I was
tempted to just remove the whole thing but there may be some utility
to such a performance testimonial if it can be done in more
professional way.  If this style must be used, then it should at least
start off with "One of the authors" instead of "I" and it should
probably be separated from the main flow of the text in a box or
footnote or something.  Alternatively, the personal testimonial style
can just be dropped in favor or more formal exposition.

Fix: 

Sorry no patch yet.

Comment 1 Murray Stokely freebsd_committer

2003-05-04 22:23:54 UTC

State Changed
From-To: open->closed

Fixed in docs/51658.