Bug 51658

Summary: [PATCH] - PR docs/50665 - fix suggestion
Product: Documentation Reporter: Johann Kois <J.Kois>
Component: Books & ArticlesAssignee: freebsd-doc (Nobody) <doc>
Status: Closed FIXED    
Severity: Affects Only Me CC: murray
Priority: Normal    
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Description Johann Kois 2003-05-01 14:10:15 UTC 
 Fix suggestion for PR docs/50665
 paragraph does not use first person any longer and has moved to "other information"
 paragraph enclosed in <example>-tag.

Fix: diff-file:
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--- chapter.sgml: doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/advanced-networking/chapter.sgml,v 1.208 ---
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How-To-Repeat:  Read handbook section 19.4.5
Comment 1 Murray Stokely freebsd_committer freebsd_triage 2003-05-04 22:21:03 UTC 
State Changed
From-To: open->closed

Thanks for the submission.  An <example> isn't really appropriate for 
this testimonial either, as it could then show up in the list of 
examples after the table of contents and the assumption is that it 
generally provides a procedure that can be followed to accomplish a 
task. 

latency was mispelled once in this patch, so I fixed this and 
simplified the sentence about the bridge adding latency to ping times. 
I think that is all that is really required now that I think about it. 
It's a more useful statement than the Pentium 90 numbers that show the 
latency that was added. 

It may be up to 24 hours before this change is available on the web site. 

Thanks!