Bug 55923

Summary: [patch] articles/laptop: fix bad english + minor sgml issues
Product: Documentation Reporter: Josef El-Rayes <j.el-rayes>
Component: Books & ArticlesAssignee: freebsd-doc (Nobody) <doc>
Status: Closed FIXED    
Severity: Affects Only Me    
Priority: Normal    
Version: Latest   
Hardware: Any   
OS: Any   
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Description Josef El-Rayes 2003-08-24 14:20:13 UTC 
		doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/laptop/article.sgml:
		1) "...FreeBSD can not seem to use..."
		this is not correct english
		
		2) added very useful link to a freebsd laptops compatibility
		database

		3) replaced "FreeBSD" with &os;
Comment 1 Marc Fonvieille freebsd_committer freebsd_triage 2003-08-24 14:43:06 UTC 
State Changed
From-To: open->closed

I committed a slightly different version of your patch: I did not do the 
s/FreeBSD/&os; since it does not bring anything to the reader and does 
not worth the "repo size increasing"; I, of course, did this change on 
new committed/changed lines. 
Thanks!