Bug 58029

Summary: [patch] news/press: correct capitalization of headlines
Product: Documentation Reporter: Josef El-Rayes <j.el-rayes>
Component: Books & ArticlesAssignee: freebsd-doc (Nobody) <doc>
Status: Closed FIXED    
Severity: Affects Only Me    
Priority: Normal    
Version: Latest   
Hardware: Any   
OS: Any   
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Description Josef El-Rayes 2003-10-14 21:50:19 UTC
					www/en/news/press.xml:
					according to the "Chicago Manual of Style" (thanks ceri)
					i noticed the following rules for headlines:
	
					the first and last words and all nouns, pronouns,
					adjectives, verbs, adverbs, and subordinating
					conjunctions (if, because, as, that, etc.)
					are capitalized.  Articles (a, an, the), coordinating 
					conjunctions (and, but, or for, nor), and prepositions,
					regardless of length, are lowercased unless they
        			are the first or last word of the title or subtitle.  The to
        		   in infinitives is also lowercased.

					i corrected all the headlines that did not apply to the
					above rules. i checked them 3x, i should not have missed
					one, but as i am not 100% certain of the english grammar
					i may have missed one or two words.

					i also exchanged "open-source" with "open source" as
					o'reilly defines it, on its word list.
Comment 1 colin.percival 2003-10-14 22:36:47 UTC
   I think you'll also find, in the Chicago Manual of Style, the following 
rule: "When quoting another author, or referencing a work, keep the 
existing punctuation and capitalization unless it is gratuitously wrong (in 
which case [sic] should be added)."
   Since these are all links to external articles, they should be left 
unchanged.

Colin Percival
Comment 2 Josef El-Rayes 2003-10-14 23:08:28 UTC
Colin Percival <colin.percival@wadham.ox.ac.uk> wrote:
>     I think you'll also find, in the Chicago Manual of Style, the following 
>  rule: "When quoting another author, or referencing a work, keep the 
>  existing punctuation and capitalization unless it is gratuitously wrong (in 
>  which case [sic] should be added)."
>     Since these are all links to external articles, they should be left 
>  unchanged.

this is why i asked in an above mail, whether i should keep it the way
it was in the original document or fix it to apply these rules.

ceri, did i misunderstand your email?

-josef
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Comment 3 colin.percival 2003-10-14 23:21:22 UTC
At 00:08 15/10/2003 +0200, Josef El-Rayes wrote:
>this is why i asked in an above mail, whether i should keep it the way
>it was in the original document or fix it to apply these rules.

   I didn't see the earlier email -- I was just looking at the PR.

   Wow.  That's wierd.  Ok, I retract my earlier remark... but I still 
think that changing the capitalization of someone else's title is *wrong*.

Colin Percival
PS. My mail server doesn't like "j.el-rayes@daemon.li"; but I assume you're 
reading www@ anyway.
Comment 4 josef freebsd_committer freebsd_triage 2004-01-15 22:40:43 UTC
State Changed
From-To: open->closed

I, the originator, state that this one can be closed.