Bug 61270

Summary: [patch] Grammatical shortcoming in FAQ, 11.2 (x.html)
Product: Documentation Reporter: Kevin Kinsey <kdk>
Component: Books & ArticlesAssignee: freebsd-doc (Nobody) <doc>
Status: Closed FIXED    
Severity: Affects Only Me    
Priority: Normal    
Version: Latest   
Hardware: Any   
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Description Kevin Kinsey 2004-01-12 21:30:12 UTC 
	The FAQ is a fine document, no doubt about that, but
section 11.2 contains the sentence "Your system is running at
a raised secureleve, is not it?" which is not according to standard
English usage and could be improved.  I see no reason to allow a
doc to be a potential "turn-off" for some future user.  True,
it would be their loss, but this is an easy fix, right?

	I'd a tad new to this, is there a CVS revision number
for this document?  The file in question is:
		
		 /usr/share/doc/en/books/faq/x.html

	and the same error appears in the WWW version, or
at least it did yesterday.

	Thanks for considering this change, and keep up the
good work, doc! (sorry, probably an old pun....)

Fix: I have two patches inline, below.  The first might be
the best, the second is more "faithful to the original".

FIRST VERSION DIFF (/usr/share/doc/en/books/faq/x.html)

SECOND VERSION DIFF (/usr/share/doc/en/books/faq/x.html)
How-To-Repeat: 
	Read section 11.2 of the FreeBSD "FAQ".
Comment 1 Ceri Davies freebsd_committer freebsd_triage 2004-01-12 22:02:10 UTC 
State Changed
From-To: open->closed

Corrected in r1.604 of doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/faq/book.sgml. 
Thanks.