Bug 66826

Summary: [patch] RELENG_4 share/man/man4/man4.i386/pnp.4 grammar, sentence breaks
Product: Documentation Reporter: Michel Lavondes <fox>
Component: Books & ArticlesAssignee: Peter Pentchev <roam>
Status: Closed FIXED    
Severity: Affects Only Me    
Priority: Normal    
Version: Latest   
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Description Michel Lavondes 2004-05-18 18:20:13 UTC 
See patch. (Not a MFC - affected language is no longer in -current)

How-To-Repeat: man 4 pnp
Comment 1 josef freebsd_committer freebsd_triage 2004-05-18 18:25:03 UTC 
Michel Lavondhs <fox@vader.aacc.cc.md.us> wrote:
> -Sets the base address for the N-th port's range (N=0..7). address=0
> +Sets the base address for the N-th port's range (N=0..7).
> +Address=0


hi michel!

please do not mix content with style/whitespace changes, as
this irritates the translation teams.

thanks for your work.

-josef

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Comment 2 Peter Pentchev freebsd_committer freebsd_triage 2004-07-15 08:22:59 UTC 
State Changed
From-To: open->analyzed

I'll take this one.
Comment 3 Peter Pentchev freebsd_committer freebsd_triage 2004-07-15 08:22:59 UTC 
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From-To: freebsd-doc->roam

I'll take this one.
Comment 4 Peter Pentchev freebsd_committer freebsd_triage 2004-07-15 14:45:26 UTC 
State Changed
From-To: analyzed->closed

I've committed several grammatical fixes to the pnp(4) manpage, some 
of which were inspired by your suggestions.  Thanks for noticing 
the problems!