Bug 70920

Summary: [PATCH] fix couple typos && s/words/entities (handbook preface)
Product: Documentation Reporter: Jesus R.Camou <jcamou>
Component: Books & ArticlesAssignee: freebsd-doc (Nobody) <doc>
Status: Closed FIXED    
Severity: Affects Only Me    
Priority: Normal    
Version: Latest   
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Description Jesus R.Camou 2004-08-24 22:20:15 UTC
doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/preface/preface.sgml:

Fix typos:

	o travelled -> traveled
	o Alt,and -> Alt, and

While in here, use entities for:

	o FreeBSD (&os;)
	o FreeBSD-STABLE (&os.stable;)
	o FreeBSD-CURRENT (&os.current;)
	o Linux	(&linux;)
Comment 1 Marc Fonvieille freebsd_committer freebsd_triage 2004-08-25 08:02:07 UTC
On Tue, Aug 24, 2004 at 01:13:33PM -0700, Jesus R.Camou wrote:
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> >Number:         70920
> >Category:       docs
> >Synopsis:       [PATCH] fix couple typos && s/words/entities (handbook preface)
> >Confidential:   no
> >Severity:       non-critical
> >Priority:       medium
> >Responsible:    freebsd-doc
> >State:          open
> >Quarter:        
> >Keywords:       
> >Date-Required:
> >Class:          update
> >Submitter-Id:   current-users
> >Arrival-Date:   Tue Aug 24 21:20:15 GMT 2004
> >Closed-Date:
> >Last-Modified:
> >Originator:     Jesus R. Camou
> >Release:        FreeBSD 4.10-STABLE i386
> >Organization:
> >Environment:
> System: FreeBSD nightfall.cox.net 4.10-STABLE FreeBSD 4.10-STABLE #11: Mon Jul 26 20:10:25 MST 2004 root@nightfall.cox.net:/usr/obj/usr/src/sys/NIGHTFALL i386
> 
> 
> 	
> >Description:
> 
> doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/preface/preface.sgml:
> 
> Fix typos:
> 
> 	o travelled -> traveled
> 	o Alt,and -> Alt, and
>

travelled seems correct for me.

> While in here, use entities for:
> 
> 	o FreeBSD (&os;)
> 	o FreeBSD-STABLE (&os.stable;)
> 	o FreeBSD-CURRENT (&os.current;)
> 	o Linux	(&linux;)
> 

The linux one is maybe important for trademark reason, the other changes
are useless.

Marc
Comment 2 Marc Fonvieille freebsd_committer freebsd_triage 2004-08-25 08:13:49 UTC
State Changed
From-To: open->closed

I added &linux; entities, since it's the Preface, using trademarks is 
important.  I also added the missing whitespace.  Thanks!