Bug 72500

Summary: Clean up Java and Jakarta Tomcat article
Product: Documentation Reporter: Chris Pepper <pepper>
Component: Books & ArticlesAssignee: Alexey Zelkin <phantom>
Status: Closed FIXED    
Severity: Affects Only Me CC: vkchan
Priority: Normal    
Version: Latest   
Hardware: Any   
OS: Any   
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Description Chris Pepper 2004-10-11 04:50:26 UTC 
	The article "Java and Jakarta Tomcat on FreeBSD" is a bit stale. It contains stale download instructions for the JDK 1.3.1 SDK.
	The language seems overly casual to me.
	In addition, there are some typos and various minor English nits in the article.

Fix: Apply this patch
	
How-To-Repeat: 	Visit http://www.freebsd.org/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/java-tomcat/
Comment 1 Ceri Davies freebsd_committer freebsd_triage 2004-10-12 22:40:57 UTC 
Adding to audit trail, from misfiled PR docs/72583:

Date: Tue, 12 Oct 2004 11:03:57 -0400 (EDT)
From: Hiten Pandya <hmp@freebsd.org>
Message-Id: <Pine.NEB.3.96L.1041012110309.69370A-100000@fledge.watson.org>
In-Reply-To: <20041011034222.2960EFDC4@www.reppep.com>

 Looks good, if someone does not get to committing the patch, I will
 do it in about a week's time.  Very busy at the moment.
 
 Kind regards,
 
 Hiten Pandya
 hmp at freebsd.org
Comment 2 Ceri Davies freebsd_committer freebsd_triage 2004-10-12 22:41:55 UTC 
Adding to audit trail, from misfiled PR docs/72586:

Date: Tue, 12 Oct 2004 08:56:42 -0700
From: "Victoria Chan" <vkchan@kendryl.net>
Message-Id: <001501c4b074$124ae690$7200a8c0@admin>

 I am also busy but I have finally got around to building a 4.10 box and
 will do some researching.
 
 /v
Comment 3 Alexey Zelkin freebsd_committer freebsd_triage 2005-02-09 09:03:08 UTC 
Responsible Changed
From-To: freebsd-doc->phantom

I'll take care
Comment 4 Alexey Zelkin freebsd_committer freebsd_triage 2005-02-09 09:21:07 UTC 
State Changed
From-To: open->closed

Committed.  Thanks!