Bug 73756

Summary: English clean-up for 5.3-RELEASE Errata
Product: Documentation Reporter: Chris Pepper <pepper>
Component: Books & ArticlesAssignee: Hiroki Sato <hrs>
Status: Closed FIXED    
Severity: Affects Only Me CC: hrs
Priority: Normal    
Version: Latest   
Hardware: Any   
OS: Any   
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Description Chris Pepper 2004-11-10 03:20:23 UTC 
	5.3-RELEASE Errata (v1.69.2.7, visible on the website): English nits
	Lots of English clean-up, like s/drivers can become poor/drivers may beave poorly/ & s/re-insert a media/re-insert the media/

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Comment 1 Hiroki Sato freebsd_committer freebsd_triage 2004-11-10 04:20:57 UTC 
Responsible Changed
From-To: freebsd-doc->hrs

I'll handle this.
Comment 2 Hiroki Sato freebsd_committer freebsd_triage 2004-11-10 04:48:48 UTC 
State Changed
From-To: open->closed

Committed, thanks a lot!