Bug 74978

Comment 1 Giorgos Keramidas 2004-12-13 09:51:11 UTC

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From-To: freebsd-doc->keramida

I'll work with Joel on this.

Comment 2 Giorgos Keramidas 2004-12-13 09:51:56 UTC

On 2004-12-12 12:05, Joel Dahl <joel@automatvapen.se> wrote:
> --- fipref.diff begins here ---
> Index: preface.sgml
> ===================================================================
> RCS file: /home/ncvs/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/preface/preface.sgml,v
> retrieving revision 1.25
> diff -u -r1.25 preface.sgml
> --- preface.sgml	25 Aug 2004 19:54:41 -0000	1.25
> +++ preface.sgml	12 Dec 2004 10:24:14 -0000
> @@ -428,6 +428,15 @@
>        </listitem>
>      </varlistentry>
>      <varlistentry>
> +      <term><emphasis><xref linkend="firewalls">, Firewalls</emphasis></term>
> +      <listitem>
> +        <para>Explains the philosophy behind software based firewalls and
> +          provides detailed information about the configuration of the
> +          different firewall software applications available for
> +          FreeBSD.</para>
> +      </listitem>
> +    </varlistentry>
> +    <varlistentry>
>        <term><emphasis><xref linkend="advanced-networking">, Advanced Networking</emphasis></term>
>        <listitem>
>  	<para>Describes many networking topics, including sharing an
> --- fipref.diff ends here ---

The phrase "firewall software applications" strikes me as a bit odd,
since the firewalls are not "applications" in the usual sense of the
word (i.e. something you run as a normal user or something).  Does the
following look ok to you, Joel?

% Index: preface.sgml
% ===================================================================
% RCS file: /home/ncvs/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/preface/preface.sgml,v
% retrieving revision 1.25
% diff -u -u -r1.25 preface.sgml
% --- preface.sgml        25 Aug 2004 19:54:41 -0000      1.25
% +++ preface.sgml        13 Dec 2004 09:48:59 -0000
% @@ -428,6 +428,14 @@
%        </listitem>
%      </varlistentry>
%      <varlistentry>
% +      <term><emphasis><xref linkend="firewalls">, Firewalls</emphasis></term>
% +      <listitem>
% +        <para>Explains the philosophy behind software-based firewalls and
% +          provides detailed information about the configuration of the
% +          different firewalls available for FreeBSD.</para>
% +      </listitem>
% +    </varlistentry>
% +    <varlistentry>
%        <term><emphasis><xref linkend="advanced-networking">, Advanced Networking</emphasis></term>
%        <listitem>
%         <para>Describes many networking topics, including sharing an

On Mon, 2004-12-13 at 11:51 +0200, Giorgos Keramidas wrote:
> The phrase "firewall software applications" strikes me as a bit odd,
> since the firewalls are not "applications" in the usual sense of the
> word (i.e. something you run as a normal user or something).  Does the
> following look ok to you, Joel?
> 
> % Index: preface.sgml
> % ===================================================================
> % RCS file: /home/ncvs/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/preface/preface.sgml,v
> % retrieving revision 1.25
> % diff -u -u -r1.25 preface.sgml
> % --- preface.sgml        25 Aug 2004 19:54:41 -0000      1.25
> % +++ preface.sgml        13 Dec 2004 09:48:59 -0000
> % @@ -428,6 +428,14 @@
> %        </listitem>
> %      </varlistentry>
> %      <varlistentry>
> % +      <term><emphasis><xref linkend="firewalls">, Firewalls</emphasis></term>
> % +      <listitem>
> % +        <para>Explains the philosophy behind software-based firewalls and
> % +          provides detailed information about the configuration of the
> % +          different firewalls available for FreeBSD.</para>
> % +      </listitem>
> % +    </varlistentry>
> % +    <varlistentry>
> %        <term><emphasis><xref linkend="advanced-networking">, Advanced Networking</emphasis></term>
> %        <listitem>
> %         <para>Describes many networking topics, including sharing an

Looks good to me, thanks.  The topic from chapter 24.3 inspired me use
"firewall software applications", maybe someone should reword that part
to something better...

On Mon, 2004-12-13 at 12:28 +0100, Joel Dahl wrote:
> Looks good to me, thanks.  The topic from chapter 24.3 inspired me use
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Comment 5 Giorgos Keramidas 2004-12-13 11:47:47 UTC

State Changed
From-To: open->closed

Committed, thanks :)