Bug 75422

Summary: [patch] syntax mistakes and obscurity in firewall chapter
Product: Documentation Reporter: Matteo Riondato <rionda>
Component: Books & ArticlesAssignee: Ceri Davies <ceri>
Status: Closed FIXED    
Severity: Affects Only Me    
Priority: Normal    
Version: Latest   
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Description Matteo Riondato 2004-12-23 07:50:21 UTC 
	Handbook Firewall chapter is a bit confused and obscure. There are many syntax mistakes (such as "it's" instead of "its")

How-To-Repeat: http://www.freebsd.org/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/firewalls.html
Comment 1 Simon L. B. Nielsen freebsd_committer freebsd_triage 2004-12-25 23:02:07 UTC 
On 2004.12.23 08:43:41 +0100, Matteo Riondato wrote:

> Handbook Firewall chapter is a bit confused and obscure. There are
> many syntax mistakes (such as "it's" instead of "its")


Thanks for working on this, unfortunatly the patch mixes whitespace
and content changes, making it very hard to see what has actually been
changed.  Could you please update the patch to only include content
changes?

Also "ruleset" is actually OK, according to the O'Reilly Word List.

-- 
Simon L. Nielsen
Comment 2 Matteo Riondato 2004-12-26 16:21:50 UTC 
Simon L. Nielsen wrote:
> changed.  Could you please update the patch to only include content
> changes?

Uh. Some problems with the patch I attached. It can be found at
http://utenti.gufi.org/~rionda/firewall.diff

Best regards


-- 
Rionda aka Matteo Riondato
GUFI Staff Member (http://www.gufi.org)
FreeSBIE Developer (http://www.freesbie.org)
BSD-FAQ-it Main Developer (http://utenti.gufi.org/~rionda)
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Comment 3 Matteo Riondato 2004-12-26 16:24:44 UTC 
Simon L. Nielsen wrote:
> changed.  Could you please update the patch to only include content
> changes?


Uh. Some problems with the patch I attached. It can be found at
http://utenti.gufi.org/~rionda/firewall.diff

Best regards


-- 
Rionda aka Matteo Riondato
GUFI Staff Member (http://www.gufi.org)
FreeSBIE Developer (http://www.freesbie.org)
BSD-FAQ-it Main Developer (http://utenti.gufi.org/~rionda)
Sent from: kaiser.sig11.org running FreeBSD-6.0-CURRENT
Comment 4 Ceri Davies freebsd_committer freebsd_triage 2005-01-01 12:08:38 UTC 
Responsible Changed
From-To: freebsd-doc->ceri

I'll work on this.
Comment 5 Ceri Davies freebsd_committer freebsd_triage 2005-01-01 13:18:56 UTC 
State Changed
From-To: open->closed

Applied with some changes - thanks!