Bug 76841

Summary: [PATCH] Fixes on www/en/docs.sgml
Product: Documentation Reporter: Jesus R.Camou <jcamou>
Component: Books & ArticlesAssignee: freebsd-doc (Nobody) <doc>
Status: Closed FIXED    
Severity: Affects Only Me    
Priority: Normal    
Version: Latest   
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Description Jesus R.Camou 2005-01-30 03:40:10 UTC 
	
	o Add a missing <br> and the name of the article in the repository
	to match the other articles on the list: (<tt>relaydelay</tt>)<br>

	o s/productization/production
Comment 1 Christian Brueffer 2005-01-30 16:03:00 UTC 
> 
> --- docs.sgml.diff begins here ---
> Index: docs.sgml
> ===================================================================
> RCS file: /home/ncvs/www/en/docs.sgml,v
> retrieving revision 1.187
> diff -u -r1.187 docs.sgml
> --- docs.sgml	31 Dec 2004 14:57:31 -0000	1.187
> +++ docs.sgml	30 Jan 2005 03:22:13 -0000
> @@ -254,7 +254,7 @@
>  	configure a FreeBSD client to boot from a PXE server.</small></p>
>  
>      <p><a href="&url.articles;/relaydelay/article.html">FreeBSD as
> -	a greylist mail server</a>
> +	a greylist mail server</a> (<tt>relaydelay</tt>)<br>
>         <small>Implementing a greylist mail server on FreeBSD
>  	using Sendmail, MySQL, Perl and the relaydelay
>  	software.  This is an excellent method to use in the
> @@ -266,7 +266,7 @@
>  	engineering team to make production quality releases of the
>  	FreeBSD Operating System. It describes the tools available
>  	for those interested in producing customized FreeBSD releases
> -	for corporate rollouts or commercial productization.</small></p>
> +	for corporate rollouts or commercial production.</small></p>
>  


Hmm, I'm not sure about the second change.  I haven't found the word
productization in the Merriam Webster online dictionary or in
dict.leo.org, but a quick google search seems to indicate that this is a
common word.

Judging from the description at http://www.maxrumpus.com/services_software.html,
the word makes sense here.

Does anyone else have an opinion on this?

- Christian

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Comment 2 Christian Brueffer freebsd_committer freebsd_triage 2005-01-31 12:48:17 UTC 
State Changed
From-To: open->closed

First part of the patch committed, thanks!