Bug 78127

Comment 1 Simon L. B. Nielsen 2005-02-26 21:15:06 UTC

Responsible Changed
From-To: freebsd-doc->simon

One for me.

Comment 2 Simon L. B. Nielsen 2005-02-26 21:43:54 UTC

State Changed
From-To: open->closed

Committed (without modifications), thanks!

Comment 3 Tom Rhodes 2005-02-26 22:11:54 UTC

On Sat, 26 Feb 2005 21:20:42 +0100
"Joel Dahl" <joel@automatvapen.se> wrote:

> 
> >Number:         78127
> >Category:       docs
> >Synopsis:       [patch] Manual page for snd_neomagic(4)
> >Confidential:   no
> >Severity:       non-critical
> >Priority:       low
> >Responsible:    freebsd-doc
> >State:          open
> >Quarter:        
> >Keywords:       
> >Date-Required:
> >Class:          doc-bug
> >Submitter-Id:   current-users
> >Arrival-Date:   Sat Feb 26 20:30:11 GMT 2005
> >Closed-Date:
> >Last-Modified:
> >Originator:     Joel Dahl
> >Release:        FreeBSD 5.3-STABLE i386
> >Organization:
> >Environment:
> System: FreeBSD dude.automatvapen.se 5.3-STABLE FreeBSD 5.3-STABLE #0: Wed Feb 23 20:14:07 CET 2005 joel@dude.automatvapen.se:/usr/obj/usr/src/sys/GENERIC i386
> 
> 	
> >Description:
> Manual page for snd_neomagic(4).
> 
> I have a bunch of other manual pages ready for shipment, but let's
> start with this one, just in case...
> 	
> >How-To-Repeat:
> 	
> >Fix:
> 	
> 
> --- snd_neomagic.4 begins here ---
> .\" Copyright (c) 2005 Joel Dahl
> .\" All rights reserved.
> .\"
> .\" Redistribution and use in source and binary forms, with or without
> .\" modification, are permitted provided that the following conditions
> .\" are met:
> .\" 1. Redistributions of source code must retain the above copyright
> .\"    notice, this list of conditions and the following disclaimer.
> .\" 2. Redistributions in binary form must reproduce the above copyright
> .\"    notice, this list of conditions and the following disclaimer in the
> .\"    documentation and/or other materials provided with the distribution.
> .\"
> .\" THIS SOFTWARE IS PROVIDED BY THE AUTHOR AND CONTRIBUTORS ``AS IS'' AND
> .\" ANY EXPRESS OR IMPLIED WARRANTIES, INCLUDING, BUT NOT LIMITED TO, THE
> .\" IMPLIED WARRANTIES OF MERCHANTABILITY AND FITNESS FOR A PARTICULAR PURPOSE
> .\" ARE DISCLAIMED.  IN NO EVENT SHALL THE AUTHOR OR CONTRIBUTORS BE LIABLE
> .\" FOR ANY DIRECT, INDIRECT, INCIDENTAL, SPECIAL, EXEMPLARY, OR CONSEQUENTIAL
> .\" DAMAGES (INCLUDING, BUT NOT LIMITED TO, PROCUREMENT OF SUBSTITUTE GOODS
> .\" OR SERVICES; LOSS OF USE, DATA, OR PROFITS; OR BUSINESS INTERRUPTION)
> .\" HOWEVER CAUSED AND ON ANY THEORY OF LIABILITY, WHETHER IN CONTRACT, STRICT
> .\" LIABILITY, OR TORT (INCLUDING NEGLIGENCE OR OTHERWISE) ARISING IN ANY WAY
> .\" OUT OF THE USE OF THIS SOFTWARE, EVEN IF ADVISED OF THE POSSIBILITY OF
> .\" SUCH DAMAGE.
> .\"
> .\" $FreeBSD$
> .\"
> .Dd February 26, 2005
> .Dt SND_NEOMAGIC 4
> .Os
> .Sh NAME
> .Nm snd_neomagic
> .Nd "NeoMagic 256AV/ZX bridge device driver"
> .Sh SYNOPSIS
> .Cd "device sound"
> .Cd "device snd_neomagic"
> .Pp

No need for .Pp here.

> .Sh DESCRIPTION
> The
> .Nm
> bridge driver allows the generic audio driver

Add a comma here, and:

> .Xr sound 4

here.

> to attach to NeoMagic 256AV/ZX audio devices.

attach 'the'?

> These chips are mostly found in laptop computers.
> .Sh HARDWARE
> The
> .Nm
> driver supports the following audio devices:
> .Pp
> .Bl -bullet -compact
> .It
> NeoMagic 256AV
> .It
> NeoMagic 256ZX
> .El
> .Sh SEE ALSO
> .Xr sound 4
> .Sh HISTORY
> The
> .Nm
> device driver first appeared in
> .Fx 4.0 .
> --- snd_neomagic.4 ends here ---

You can also put an authors section if you want to provide
more information.  :)

-- 
Tom Rhodes

On Sat, 2005-02-26 at 17:11 -0500, Tom Rhodes wrote:
> You can also put an authors section if you want to provide
> more information.  :)

Yep, but personally, I don't like the AUTHORS section, my name at the
top of the license is perfectly sufficient for me.  :)

Simon committed it without your modifications (the commas), but if you
feel that they should be used, just commit them.

--
Joel