Bug 78132

Summary: Be even more verbose about where ip aliases go
Product: Documentation Reporter: Brad Davis <so14k>
Component: Books & ArticlesAssignee: Remko Lodder <remko>
Status: Closed FIXED    
Severity: Affects Only Me    
Priority: Normal    
Version: Latest   
Hardware: Any   
OS: Any   
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Description Brad Davis 2005-02-26 22:50:26 UTC

    
Comment 1 Remko Lodder freebsd_committer freebsd_triage 2005-02-26 22:57:30 UTC
Responsible Changed
From-To: freebsd-doc->remko

Grab this PR
Comment 2 Siebrand Mazeland 2005-02-26 23:03:48 UTC
Nice change. I propose to commit the diff and remove a few excess spaces in
the
<programlisting> that is below the changed paragraph in the process.

Cheers! Siebrand

diff -u -r1.205 chapter.sgml
--- en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/config/chapter.sgml	20 Feb 2005 14:04:13
-0000	1.205
+++ en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/config/chapter.sgml	26 Feb 2005 23:01:30
-0000
@@ -1278,18 +1278,18 @@
       <hostid role="ipaddr">202.0.75.20</hostid>) must be configured with a
       netmask of <hostid role="netmask">255.255.255.255</hostid>.</para>
 
-    <para>The following entries configure the adapter correctly for
-      this arrangement:</para>
+    <para>The following <filename>/etc/rc.conf</filename> entries
+      configure the adapter correctly for this arrangement:</para>
 
-<programlisting> ifconfig_fxp0="inet 10.1.1.1 netmask 255.255.255.0"
- ifconfig_fxp0_alias0="inet 10.1.1.2 netmask 255.255.255.255"
- ifconfig_fxp0_alias1="inet 10.1.1.3 netmask 255.255.255.255"
- ifconfig_fxp0_alias2="inet 10.1.1.4 netmask 255.255.255.255"
- ifconfig_fxp0_alias3="inet 10.1.1.5 netmask 255.255.255.255"
- ifconfig_fxp0_alias4="inet 202.0.75.17 netmask 255.255.255.240"
- ifconfig_fxp0_alias5="inet 202.0.75.18 netmask 255.255.255.255"
- ifconfig_fxp0_alias6="inet 202.0.75.19 netmask 255.255.255.255"
- ifconfig_fxp0_alias7="inet 202.0.75.20 netmask
255.255.255.255"</programlisting>
+<programlisting>ifconfig_fxp0="inet 10.1.1.1 netmask 255.255.255.0"
+ifconfig_fxp0_alias0="inet 10.1.1.2 netmask 255.255.255.255"
+ifconfig_fxp0_alias1="inet 10.1.1.3 netmask 255.255.255.255"
+ifconfig_fxp0_alias2="inet 10.1.1.4 netmask 255.255.255.255"
+ifconfig_fxp0_alias3="inet 10.1.1.5 netmask 255.255.255.255"
+ifconfig_fxp0_alias4="inet 202.0.75.17 netmask 255.255.255.240"
+ifconfig_fxp0_alias5="inet 202.0.75.18 netmask 255.255.255.255"
+ifconfig_fxp0_alias6="inet 202.0.75.19 netmask 255.255.255.255"
+ifconfig_fxp0_alias7="inet 202.0.75.20 netmask
255.255.255.255"</programlisting>
 
   </sect1>
Comment 3 Tom Rhodes freebsd_committer freebsd_triage 2005-02-26 23:11:17 UTC
On Sat, 26 Feb 2005 15:49:14 -0700 (MST)
Brad Davis <so14k@so14k.com> wrote:

> 
> >Number:         78132
> >Category:       docs
> >Synopsis:       Be even more verbose about where ip aliases go
> >Confidential:   no
> >Severity:       non-critical
> >Priority:       low
> >Responsible:    freebsd-doc
> >State:          open
> >Quarter:        
> >Keywords:       
> >Date-Required:
> >Class:          change-request
> >Submitter-Id:   current-users
> >Arrival-Date:   Sat Feb 26 22:50:26 GMT 2005
> >Closed-Date:
> >Last-Modified:
> >Originator:     Brad Davis
> >Release:        FreeBSD 5.4-PRERELEASE i386
> >Organization:
> >Environment:
> System: FreeBSD mccaffrey.house.so14k.com 5.4-PRERELEASE FreeBSD 5.4-PRERELEASE #0: Thu Feb 24 17:03:44 MST 2005 root@mccaffrey.house.so14k.com:/usr/obj/usr/src/sys/SMP i386
> >Description:
> >How-To-Repeat:
> >Fix:
> 
> 
> --- doc-ori/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/config/chapter.sgml	Fri Feb 25 13:31:40 2005
> +++ doc2/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/config/chapter.sgml	Sat Feb 26 15:42:22 2005
> @@ -1278,8 +1278,8 @@
>        <hostid role="ipaddr">202.0.75.20</hostid>) must be configured with a
>        netmask of <hostid role="netmask">255.255.255.255</hostid>.</para>
>  
> -    <para>The following entries configure the adapter correctly for
> -      this arrangement:</para>
> +    <para>The following <filename>/etc/rc.conf</filename> entries
> +      configure the adapter correctly for this arrangement:</para>
>  
>  <programlisting> ifconfig_fxp0="inet 10.1.1.1 netmask 255.255.255.0"
>   ifconfig_fxp0_alias0="inet 10.1.1.2 netmask 255.255.255.255"

I think this is a good change.

-- 
Tom Rhodes
Comment 4 Brad Davis 2005-02-26 23:27:28 UTC
Hi Siebrand,


Please note whitespace changes shouldn't be mixed with content changes..



Regards,
Brad Davis
Comment 5 Remko Lodder freebsd_committer freebsd_triage 2005-02-27 11:28:03 UTC
State Changed
From-To: open->closed

Patch applied. Thanks both for the submission!