Bug 80133

Summary: twe(4) man page typos
Product: Documentation Reporter: Zheyu Shen <free.bsd>
Component: Books & ArticlesAssignee: Christian Brueffer <brueffer>
Status: Closed FIXED    
Severity: Affects Only Me    
Priority: Normal    
Version: Latest   
Hardware: Any   
OS: Any   
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Description Zheyu Shen 2005-04-20 11:10:16 UTC 
two typos in the twe(4) man page

How-To-Repeat: read twe(4) man page
Comment 1 Christian Brueffer 2005-04-20 11:45:34 UTC 
On Wed, Apr 20, 2005 at 10:05:17AM +0000, Zheyu Shen wrote:
>  .It twe%d: device_add_child failed
>  .It twe%d: bus_generic_attach returned %d
>  .Pp
> -Creation of the disk devices failed, either due to communications
> +Creation of the disk devices failed, either due to communication
>  problems with the adapter or due to resource shortage;


Hi,

i have committed the first part of the patch.  I'm not sure about the
second part.  As far as I know, both versions are correct.  What do our
native speakers here think?

- Christian

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Comment 2 Christian Brueffer freebsd_committer freebsd_triage 2005-04-20 11:45:36 UTC 
State Changed
From-To: open->feedback

Committed the first part of the patch, awaiting feedback on the 
second part.
Comment 3 Christian Brueffer freebsd_committer freebsd_triage 2005-04-20 11:45:36 UTC 
Responsible Changed
From-To: freebsd-doc->brueffer

Grab this.
Comment 4 Christian Brueffer freebsd_committer freebsd_triage 2005-05-12 17:19:13 UTC 
State Changed
From-To: feedback->patched

Also committed the second part.  Though both forms are correct, 
your suggestion seems better.  Thanks! (MFC pending)
Comment 5 Christian Brueffer freebsd_committer freebsd_triage 2005-05-15 08:15:17 UTC 
State Changed
From-To: patched->closed

All done.  Thanks for the submission!