Bug 80259

Summary: portaudit typo / elaborate on daily security run emails
Product: Documentation Reporter: Brad Davis <so14k>
Component: Books & ArticlesAssignee: Tom Rhodes <trhodes>
Status: Closed FIXED    
Severity: Affects Only Me    
Priority: Normal    
Version: Latest   
Hardware: Any   
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Description Brad Davis 2005-04-22 19:20:24 UTC
	Fix a typo (s/power/powerful) & elaborate on the importance of the daily security run emails
Comment 1 Brad Davis 2005-04-22 20:30:29 UTC
Here is a new patch per discussion with trhodes@

 
--- doc-ori/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/security/chapter.sgml	Fri Apr 22 11:51:50 2005
+++ doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/security/chapter.sgml	Fri Apr 22 13:24:28 2005
@@ -4733,7 +4733,9 @@
     <para>During the install process, the configuration files for
       &man.periodic.8; will be updated, permitting
       <application>Portaudit</application> output in the daily security
-      runs.  No more configuration will be required here.</para>
+      runs.  Ensure the daily security run emails, which are sent to
+      <username>root</username>'s email account, are being read.  No
+      more configuration will be required here.</para>
 
     <para>After installation, an administrator must update the database
       stored locally in
@@ -4771,7 +4773,7 @@
       by &os; Port version, along with other web sites which may contain
       security advisories.</para>
 
-    <para>In short, <application>Portaudit</application> is a power
+    <para>In short, <application>Portaudit</application> is a powerful
       utility and extremely useful when coupled with the
       <application>Portupgrade</application> port.</para>
   </sect1>
Comment 2 jcamou freebsd_committer freebsd_triage 2005-04-22 21:35:35 UTC
Responsible Changed
From-To: freebsd-doc->jcamou

Grab this one.
Comment 3 jcamou freebsd_committer freebsd_triage 2005-04-22 22:18:42 UTC
Responsible Changed
From-To: jcamou->trhodes

Over to trhodes as per his request.
Comment 4 jcamou freebsd_committer freebsd_triage 2005-04-22 22:42:21 UTC
State Changed
From-To: open->closed

Patch committed, thanks!