| Summary: | Re: Corrections to os-comparisons slides | ||
|---|---|---|---|
| Product: | Documentation | Reporter: | Murray Stokely <murray> |
| Component: | Books & Articles | Assignee: | Murray Stokely <murray> |
| Status: | Closed FIXED | ||
| Severity: | Affects Only Me | CC: | FreeBSD-gnats-submit |
| Priority: | Normal | ||
| Version: | Latest | ||
| Hardware: | Any | ||
| OS: | Any | ||
State Changed From-To: open->closed Misfiled followup to www/81969, already committed. Responsible Changed From-To: gnats-admin->murray murray committed the underlying change. |
On Mon, Jun 06, 2005 at 08:18:55PM +0100, Gavin Atkinson wrote: > - CVS. A large team (300+) of senior developers has write access > + CVS. A large team (300+) of senior developers have write access All your fixes look good except this one. A 'team' is singular, so it was originally correct. 'of senior developers' describes the subject (a team) but does not constitute the subject. The content is still old and needs to be updated before we should link to this document. - Murray