Bug 86650

Summary: [patch] correct various issues in the handbook entry geom/chapter.sgml (gmirror section)
Product: Documentation Reporter: darth <darth>
Component: Books & ArticlesAssignee: Remko Lodder <remko>
Status: Closed FIXED    
Severity: Affects Only Me    
Priority: Normal    
Version: Latest   
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Description darth 2005-09-27 22:10:16 UTC
Order of commands issued and result is inconsistent.
Some minor typos.
Swap space removed, should reference how to re-establish that.

Fix: - add expected output when correctly applying gmirror
- the device entries do not appear after 'gmirror label' but first after 'gmirror load' (move para)
- 'geom load' -> 'gmirror load' (could also have been 'geom mirror load')
- add footnote about that references section about adding swapspace, since this example removes it.
- make fstab file be a 'screen', not a 'programlisting'
- typo; gm0sa1 -> gm0s1a
How-To-Repeat: Read the handbook section:  RAID1 - Mirroring
Comment 1 Remko Lodder freebsd_committer freebsd_triage 2005-09-27 23:52:22 UTC
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From-To: freebsd-doc->remko

I will update the GEOM chapter.
Comment 2 Florent Thoumie 2005-11-08 17:30:35 UTC
I would change that too :

@@ -346,10 +346,10 @@
        new root partition, a failsafe is available.</para>
     </note>

-    <para>Now add the following line to
+    <para>Now add the following line to the new
       <filename>/boot/loader.conf:</filename></para>

-    <screen>&prompt.root; <userinput>echo 'geom_mirror_load="YES"'
&gt;&gt; /boot/loader.conf</userinput></screen>
+    <screen>&prompt.root; <userinput>echo 'geom_mirror_load="YES"'
&gt;&gt; /mnt/boot/loader.conf</userinput></screen>

     <para>This will instruct &man.loader.8; utility to load the
       <filename>geom_mirror.ko</filename> during system

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Florent Thoumie
flz@FreeBSD.org
FreeBSD Committer
Comment 3 Remko Lodder freebsd_committer freebsd_triage 2005-11-09 20:11:03 UTC
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From-To: open->closed

I finally added your patch (with flz's feedback) to the handbook 
chapter.  Sorry for the delay! It should appear within 24 
hours from now.  Thanks for the submission!