Bug 92885

Summary: Meanless sentence in handbook?
Product: Documentation Reporter: Enrique Matías Sánchez <cronopios>
Component: Books & ArticlesAssignee: Tom Rhodes <trhodes>
Status: Closed FIXED    
Severity: Affects Only Me    
Priority: Normal    
Version: Latest   
Hardware: Any   
OS: Any   

Description Enrique Matías Sánchez 2006-02-06 12:10:04 UTC
              In section "Understanding MAC Labels" (Chapter 15.4 of the handbook) it is written:

    Numeric grade numbers used for comparison:compartment+compartment; thus the following:

Is that proper English?
I am not a native speaker, but, is not `numeric' or `numbers' redundant?
Should not there be an `are' before `used'?

Thanks.

How-To-Repeat:               Visit "Understanding MAC Labels" (chapter about Mandatory Access Control) of the handbook.
Comment 1 Giorgos Keramidas freebsd_committer freebsd_triage 2006-05-10 20:01:44 UTC
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From-To: freebsd-doc->trhodes

Tom is the right person to let us know what this part 
of the MAC chapter means.
Comment 2 Tom Rhodes freebsd_committer freebsd_triage 2006-05-21 23:34:40 UTC
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From-To: open->closed

I've committed a fix, thanks!