Bug 92986

Summary: [patch] some modification and updates for projects/newbies.html
Product: Documentation Reporter: Daniel Gerzo <danger>
Component: Books & ArticlesAssignee: jcamou
Status: Closed FIXED    
Severity: Affects Only Me    
Priority: Normal    
Version: Latest   
Hardware: Any   
OS: Any   
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Description Daniel Gerzo 2006-02-07 19:00:18 UTC
I've added some more content, modified a few lines and fixed some links,
and removed smilies ":-)". Built version is available at:

http://www.sk.freebsd.org/projects/newbies.new.html

How-To-Repeat: http://www.freebsd.org/projects/newbies.html
Comment 1 jcamou freebsd_committer freebsd_triage 2006-02-07 19:21:43 UTC
On Tue, Feb 07, 2006 at 06:57:36PM +0000, Daniel Gerzo wrote:
> @@ -87,8 +92,8 @@
>  	  everything you need to know to set up and run a FreeBSD system. You
>  	  also get to understand what you are doing and why.</p></li>
>        
> -      <li><p>The <a href="&base;/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/index.html">FreeBSD Handbook</a> and <a
> -	    href="&base;/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/faq/index.html">Frequently Asked Questions (FAQ)</a> are the
> +      <li><p>The <a href="&url.books;/handbook/index.html">FreeBSD Handbook</a> and <a
> +	    href="&url.books;/faq/index.html">Frequently Asked Questions (FAQ)</a> are the
>  	  main documents for FreeBSD. Essential reading, they contain a lot of
				     ^^ 
Always remember to double space after a dot.

>  	  material for newbies as well as some pretty advanced stuff. Do not
>  	  worry if you are unable to understand the advanced sections. The handbook
> @@ -127,6 +132,12 @@
>        easier.</p>
>  
>      <ul>
> +      <li><p>The <a href="&url.books;/handbook/basics.html">&unix;
> +	  Basics</a> chapter of the FreeBSD Handbook covers the basic
> +	  commands and functionality of FreeBSD operating system. Most
								 ^^
Just a quick review, cheers.

--
Jesus R. Camou - jcamou@FreeBSD.org
Comment 2 jcamou freebsd_committer freebsd_triage 2006-02-07 19:37:13 UTC
On Tue, Feb 07, 2006 at 07:30:10PM +0000, Jesus R. Camou wrote:
> The following reply was made to PR www/92986; it has been noted by GNATS.
> 
> From: "Jesus R. Camou" <jcamou@FreeBSD.org>
> To: Daniel Gerzo <danger@rulez.sk>
> Cc: FreeBSD-gnats-submit@FreeBSD.org
> Subject: Re: www/92986: [patch] some modification and updates for projects/newbies.html
> Date: Tue, 7 Feb 2006 19:21:43 +0000
> 
>  On Tue, Feb 07, 2006 at 06:57:36PM +0000, Daniel Gerzo wrote:
>  > @@ -87,8 +92,8 @@
>  >  	  everything you need to know to set up and run a FreeBSD system. You
>  >  	  also get to understand what you are doing and why.</p></li>
>  >        
>  > -      <li><p>The <a href="&base;/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/index.html">FreeBSD Handbook</a> and <a
>  > -	    href="&base;/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/faq/index.html">Frequently Asked Questions (FAQ)</a> are the
>  > +      <li><p>The <a href="&url.books;/handbook/index.html">FreeBSD Handbook</a> and <a
>  > +	    href="&url.books;/faq/index.html">Frequently Asked Questions (FAQ)</a> are the
>  >  	  main documents for FreeBSD. Essential reading, they contain a lot of
>  				     ^^ 
>  Always remember to double space after a dot.

My bad, that one was like that already.
>  
>  >  	  material for newbies as well as some pretty advanced stuff. Do not
>  >  	  worry if you are unable to understand the advanced sections. The handbook
>  > @@ -127,6 +132,12 @@
>  >        easier.</p>
>  >  
>  >      <ul>
>  > +      <li><p>The <a href="&url.books;/handbook/basics.html">&unix;
>  > +	  Basics</a> chapter of the FreeBSD Handbook covers the basic
>  > +	  commands and functionality of FreeBSD operating system. Most
>  								 ^^

This one wasn't though. :)

-- 
Jesus R. Camou - jcamou@FreeBSD.org
Comment 3 jcamou freebsd_committer freebsd_triage 2006-02-17 14:51:49 UTC
Responsible Changed
From-To: freebsd-www->jcamou

Take.
Comment 4 jcamou freebsd_committer freebsd_triage 2006-03-06 16:25:44 UTC
State Changed
From-To: open->closed

Committed, thanks.