Bug 94888

Summary:	Grammar change to http://www.freebsd.org/doc/en/books/handbook/ports-using.html
Product:	Documentation	Reporter:	Joel Gudknecht <photohaus>
Component:	Books & Articles	Assignee:	Remko Lodder <remko>
Status:	Closed FIXED
Severity:	Affects Only Me
Priority:	Normal
Version:	Latest
Hardware:	Any
OS:	Any

Description Joel Gudknecht 2006-03-24 00:00:33 UTC

Read this section of http://www.freebsd.org/doc/en/books/handbook/ports-using.html:

It is a good idea to delete the working subdirectory, which contains all the temporary files used during compilation. Not only it consumes a valuable disk space, it would also cause problems later when upgrading to the newer version of the port.

Fix: 

Should be:

It is a good idea to delete the working subdirectory, which contains all the temporary files used during compilation. Not only does it consume valuable disk space, it would also cause problems later when upgrading to the newer version of the port.
How-To-Repeat: N/A

Comment 1 Ceri Davies 2006-03-24 13:16:19 UTC

On 23/3/06 23:54, "Joel Gudknecht" <photohaus@gmail.com> wrote:

> Should be:
> 
> It is a good idea to delete the working subdirectory, which contains all the
> temporary files used during compilation. Not only does it consume valuable
> disk space, it would also cause problems later when upgrading to the newer
> version of the port.

Or even:

Not only does it consume valuable disk space, but it would also cause
problems later when upgrading to the newer version of the port.

-- 
That must be wonderful!  I don't understand it at all.
                                      -- Moliere

Comment 2 Daniel Gerzo 2006-05-13 20:39:59 UTC

Hello bug-followup,

  What about:

  It does not only consume valuable disk space, but it would also cause
  problems later when upgrading to the newer version of the port.

-- 
Sincerely,
  Daniel Gerzo

Comment 3 Remko Lodder freebsd_committer

2006-05-13 20:44:18 UTC

Responsible Changed
From-To: freebsd-www->remko

grab.

Comment 4 Remko Lodder freebsd_committer

2006-06-19 22:08:57 UTC

State Changed
From-To: open->closed

I committed the idea from Ceri last night.   Thanks for the 
report and taking the time to actually report this! 
The change should be visible already.