Rectify ambiguous English, make it easier to read 1st. time, ("may" can be read as a command, EG "you may not drive without a licence" "might" is more indicative, needs less chance of a 2nd. read). Fix: This patch applies to at least all between 4.0 & 7.0 I append a copy of http://berklix.com/~jhs/src/bsd/fixes/FreeBSD/src/gen/sbin/ipfw/ipfw.8.REL=ALL.diff Rectify ambiguous English, make it easier to read 1st. time, ("may" can be read as a command, EG "you may not drive without a licence" "might" is more indicative, needs less chance of a 2nd. read). How-To-Repeat: -
Responsible Changed From-To: freebsd-bugs->freebsd-doc Over to maintainer(s).
Author: gavin Date: Sat Mar 20 14:42:16 2010 New Revision: 205372 URL: http://svn.freebsd.org/changeset/base/205372 Log: Tweak language to make one point potentially clearer for non-native spekers PR: bin/121424 Submitted by: "Julian H. Stacey" <jhs berklix.org> Modified: head/sbin/ipfw/ipfw.8 Modified: head/sbin/ipfw/ipfw.8 ============================================================================== --- head/sbin/ipfw/ipfw.8 Sat Mar 20 14:36:39 2010 (r205371) +++ head/sbin/ipfw/ipfw.8 Sat Mar 20 14:42:16 2010 (r205372) @@ -1,7 +1,7 @@ .\" .\" $FreeBSD$ .\" -.Dd June 24, 2009 +.Dd March 20, 2010 .Dt IPFW 8 .Os .Sh NAME @@ -1501,7 +1501,7 @@ is invalid) whenever .Cm xmit is used. .Pp -A packet may not have a receive or transmit interface: packets +A packet might not have a receive or transmit interface: packets originating from the local host have no receive interface, while packets destined for the local host have no transmit interface. _______________________________________________ svn-src-all@freebsd.org mailing list http://lists.freebsd.org/mailman/listinfo/svn-src-all To unsubscribe, send any mail to "svn-src-all-unsubscribe@freebsd.org"
State Changed From-To: open->closed Fied in head. Thanks!