http://www.freebsd.org/doc/en/books/arch-handbook/boot-kernel.html "To where exactly is the execution passed by the loader, i.e. what is the kernel's actual entry point. Let us take a look at the command that links the kernel:" should read "In order to see where the kernel is actually loaded you need to examine the command that links the kernel" or something to that extent. The current text is barely proper English.
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manolis 2008-09-03 15:45:54 UTC FreeBSD doc repository Modified files: en_US.ISO8859-1/books/arch-handbook/boot chapter.sgml Log: Reword a paragraph to more proper English PR: docs/127027 Submitted by: Eitan Adler <eitan.adler+fbsd@gmail.com> Approved by: gabor (mentor) Revision Changes Path 1.27 +4 -3 doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/arch-handbook/boot/chapter.sgml _______________________________________________ cvs-all@freebsd.org mailing list http://lists.freebsd.org/mailman/listinfo/cvs-all To unsubscribe, send any mail to "cvs-all-unsubscribe@freebsd.org"
State Changed From-To: open->closed This is now fixed. Thanks for your submission!