Bug 127027 - update to fbsd handbook
Summary: update to fbsd handbook
Status: Closed FIXED
Alias: None
Product: Documentation
Classification: Unclassified
Component: Documentation (show other bugs)
Version: Latest
Hardware: Any Any
: Normal Affects Only Me
Assignee: Manolis Kiagias
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Reported: 2008-09-01 19:50 UTC by Eitan Adler
Modified: 2008-09-03 16:52 UTC (History)
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Description Eitan Adler freebsd_committer freebsd_triage 2008-09-01 19:50:01 UTC
http://www.freebsd.org/doc/en/books/arch-handbook/boot-kernel.html 
"To where exactly is the execution passed by the loader, i.e. what is the kernel's actual entry point. Let us take a look at the command that links the kernel:"
should read 
"In order to see where the kernel is actually loaded you need to examine the command that links the kernel"  or something to that extent.  The current text is barely proper English.
Comment 1 Manolis Kiagias freebsd_committer 2008-09-01 21:04:56 UTC
Responsible Changed
From-To: freebsd-doc->manolis

Assign to me
Comment 2 dfilter service freebsd_committer 2008-09-03 16:46:08 UTC
manolis     2008-09-03 15:45:54 UTC

  FreeBSD doc repository

  Modified files:
    en_US.ISO8859-1/books/arch-handbook/boot chapter.sgml 
  Log:
  Reword a paragraph to more proper English
  
  PR:             docs/127027
  Submitted by:   Eitan Adler <eitan.adler+fbsd@gmail.com>
  Approved by:    gabor (mentor)
  
  Revision  Changes    Path
  1.27      +4 -3      doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/arch-handbook/boot/chapter.sgml
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Comment 3 Manolis Kiagias freebsd_committer 2008-09-03 16:51:17 UTC
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From-To: open->closed

This is now fixed. Thanks for your submission!