Bug 203338 - Sentence rewording
Summary: Sentence rewording
Status: Closed FIXED
Alias: None
Product: Documentation
Classification: Unclassified
Component: Books & Articles (show other bugs)
Version: Latest
Hardware: Any Any
: --- Affects Only Me
Assignee: Jason Helfman
URL:
Keywords: patch
Depends on:
Blocks:
 
Reported: 2015-09-25 17:01 UTC by varnishedgreen
Modified: 2015-10-01 15:42 UTC (History)
1 user (show)

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Description varnishedgreen 2015-09-25 17:01:12 UTC 
Created attachment 161387 [details]
Diff file for proposed fix.

Sentence in 8.19 felt awkward to read.
Comment 1 commit-hook freebsd_committer freebsd_triage 2015-10-01 15:42:27 UTC 
A commit references this bug:

Author: jgh
Date: Thu Oct  1 15:42:04 UTC 2015
New revision: 47470
URL: https://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/47470

Log:
  - tighten and clarify wording

  PR:		203338 (based on)
  Submitted by:	varnishedgreen@aim.com
  Approved by:	wblock@ (mentor)
  Differential Revision:	https://reviews.freebsd.org/D3749

Changes:
  head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/faq/book.xml