Bug 203340 - Minor Clarity Improvement to Section 17.14.3.1
Summary: Minor Clarity Improvement to Section 17.14.3.1
Status: Closed FIXED
Alias: None
Product: Documentation
Classification: Unclassified
Component: Books & Articles (show other bugs)
Version: Latest
Hardware: Any Any
: --- Affects Only Me
Assignee: freebsd-doc (Nobody)
URL:
Keywords: patch
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Reported: 2015-09-25 17:15 UTC by mwalker1025
Modified: 2015-10-03 06:54 UTC (History)
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I hope I did this properly. (507 bytes, patch)
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Description mwalker1025 2015-09-25 17:15:26 UTC 
Created attachment 161390 [details]
I hope I did this properly.

An extremely minor clarity quibble, regarding the phrasing of one sentence of documentation found in section 17.14.3.1: Recovering from the Split-brain Condition.

The original is: "The administrator must decide which node has more important changes or merge them manually."
I would rather state the sentence as: "The administrator must either decide which node has more important changes, or perform the merge manually."

The attached .patch file contains the change as stated here, assuming that I generated it correctly.
Comment 1 commit-hook freebsd_committer freebsd_triage 2015-09-27 21:56:32 UTC 
A commit references this bug:

Author: allanjude
Date: Sun Sep 27 21:56:03 UTC 2015
New revision: 47445
URL: https://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/47445

Log:
  Improve the instructions in the HAST section of the handbook

  PR:		203340
  Submitted by:	mwalker1025@gmail.com
  Approved by:	bcr (mentor)
  Sponsored by:	EuroBSDCon DevSummit

Changes:
  head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/disks/chapter.xml