Bug 204704 - [patch] Typos in website at /features.html
Summary: [patch] Typos in website at /features.html
Status: Closed FIXED
Alias: None
Product: Documentation
Classification: Unclassified
Component: Website (show other bugs)
Version: Latest
Hardware: Any Any
: --- Affects Many People
Assignee: freebsd-doc (Nobody)
URL:
Keywords: patch
Depends on:
Blocks:
 
Reported: 2015-11-20 18:09 UTC by scottcheloha
Modified: 2015-12-15 18:21 UTC (History)
1 user (show)

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patch for typo fixes (1.21 KB, patch)
2015-11-20 18:09 UTC, scottcheloha 		no flags Details | Diff
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Description scottcheloha 2015-11-20 18:09:57 UTC 
Created attachment 163358 [details]
patch for typo fixes

Some misc. typos at http://www.freebsd.org/features.html:

While "world-wide" is acceptable, "worldwide" is preferred.

"introduced" should be "introduces" in order to maintain present tense with "replaces."

"These allow" seems awkward.  Why not, "Together, they provide"?

"ABI preserving" should be "ABI-preserving."
Comment 1 commit-hook freebsd_committer freebsd_triage 2015-12-15 18:17:22 UTC 
A commit references this bug:

Author: brueffer
Date: Tue Dec 15 18:16:48 UTC 2015
New revision: 47864
URL: https://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/47864

Log:
  Several minor wording, spelling and grammar improvements.

  PR:		204704
  Submitted by:	scottcheloha@gmail.com

Changes:
  head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/features.xml
Comment 2 Christian Brueffer freebsd_committer freebsd_triage 2015-12-15 18:21:05 UTC 
Committed, thanks!