Created attachment 163635 [details] Rewrite of the XML comments section in FDP There are two serious problems in section 7.5 (XML comments) in the FDP (see also http://www.w3.org/TR/2006/REC-xml11-20060816/#sec-comments): 1) 'The delimiter for XML comments is the string "--" ...'. This is wrong. An XML comment starts with the string "<!--" and ends with the string "-->". 2) The fourth example in "Example 7.6" is wrong. It is not a valid XML comment because an XML comment must not contain the string "--". I suggest a complete rewrite of that section.
A commit references this bug: Author: gabor Date: Thu Sep 8 14:40:04 UTC 2016 New revision: 49372 URL: https://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/49372 Log: - Update and simplify section on comments according to the XML standard (this section still reflected some old SGML constructs). PR: 204885 Submitted by: Andreas Perstinger <andipersti@gmail.com> Changes: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/xml-primer/chapter.xml
Committed, thanks!
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