Created attachment 167161 [details] Diff file The there should be no ',' in the sentence on line 24. The clause after the comma is not a complete sentence.
Without a full path, it's a little difficult to identify the exact location of this file. I disagree about the comma, the sentence needs a pause there. Finally, this appears to be Subversion code that would need to be modified by the upstream project to have a lasting effect.
(I agree with Warren, and was going to close the bug as WONTFIX if jgh had not grabbed it.)
Timeout. Please re-open with more context as to where this change is in the documentation tree. A full path is something that would be helpful in locating the document that needs addressing.