Bug 213519 - [patch] reword some awkward sentences on the website
Summary: [patch] reword some awkward sentences on the website
Status: Closed FIXED
Alias: None
Product: Documentation
Classification: Unclassified
Component: Website (show other bugs)
Version: Latest
Hardware: Any Any
: --- Affects Only Me
Assignee: freebsd-doc (Nobody)
URL:
Keywords: patch
Depends on:
Blocks:
 
Reported: 2016-10-16 00:12 UTC by Mark Linimon
Modified: 2016-12-16 23:45 UTC (History)
1 user (show)

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combo patch for website (8.24 KB, patch)
2016-10-16 00:12 UTC, Mark Linimon 		no flags Details | Diff
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Description Mark Linimon freebsd_committer freebsd_triage 2016-10-16 00:12:17 UTC 
Created attachment 175801 [details]
combo patch for website

I am going through the website looking for stale information.  While here, I am finding various other problems.

This combo patch does several things:

 * cleans up some awkward wording on various pages
 * changes 'CVS repository' to 'source repository'
 * clarifies some information about the Ports Collection
 * adds an anchor to a link in the sidebar that goes to the Donations page
 * does some minor whitespace cleanup
Comment 1 Warren Block freebsd_committer freebsd_triage 2016-12-16 23:45:37 UTC 
Committed, thanks!
Comment 2 commit-hook freebsd_committer freebsd_triage 2016-12-16 23:45:42 UTC 
A commit references this bug:

Author: wblock
Date: Fri Dec 16 23:45:10 UTC 2016
New revision: 49745
URL: https://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/49745

Log:
  Reword some awkward sentences on the website. Includes some contraction
  expansions and minor edits in addition to linimon's patch.

  PR:		213519
  Submitted by:	linimon

Changes:
  head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/advocacy/whyusefreebsd.xml
  head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/community/mailinglists.xml
  head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/docproj/current.xml
  head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/docproj/docproj.xml
  head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/mailto.xml
  head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/projects/newbies.xml
  head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/search/sitemap.xml
  head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/where.xml
  head/share/xml/header.ent