Bug 218069 - Small Typos in Introduction Chapters in Handbook
Summary: Small Typos in Introduction Chapters in Handbook
Status: Closed FIXED
Alias: None
Product: Documentation
Classification: Unclassified
Component: Documentation (show other bugs)
Version: Latest
Hardware: Any Any
: --- Affects Only Me
Assignee: freebsd-doc (Nobody)
URL:
Keywords: patch
Depends on:
Blocks:
 
Reported: 2017-03-24 17:00 UTC by Daniel Petti
Modified: 2017-04-09 00:50 UTC (History)
1 user (show)

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The diff file for the chapter that I changed. (931 bytes, patch)
2017-03-24 17:00 UTC, Daniel Petti
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Description Daniel Petti 2017-03-24 17:00:18 UTC
Created attachment 181145 [details]
The diff file for the chapter that I changed.

In the introduction chapter of the Handbook, particularly, under the list of companies that use FreeBSD, there seem to be some small typos.

First of all, the Stormshield section is written in the first person, which does not seem correct.

Second, the Weather Channel section is missing an apostrophe.

I've included a diff of the chapter.xml file for the introduction which fixes the problem.

Furthermore, here is a link to the relevant page:

https://www.freebsd.org/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/nutshell.html
Comment 1 commit-hook freebsd_committer 2017-04-09 00:49:05 UTC
A commit references this bug:

Author: brd
Date: Sun Apr  9 00:48:25 UTC 2017
New revision: 50139
URL: https://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/50139

Log:
  Fix some grammer and a missing apostrophe.

  PR:		218069
  Submitted by:	Daniel Petti <djpetti@me.com>

Changes:
  head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/introduction/chapter.xml
Comment 2 Brad Davis freebsd_committer 2017-04-09 00:50:31 UTC
Committed, thanks for the submission!

In the future please provide the full path when creating the diff, i.e. from the root of the svn checkout run `svn diff head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/introduction/chapter.xml'