Bug 224531 - FDP Primer, text reads "working of documentation"
Summary: FDP Primer, text reads "working of documentation"
Status: Closed FIXED
Alias: None
Product: Documentation
Classification: Unclassified
Component: Books & Articles (show other bugs)
Version: Latest
Hardware: Any Any
: --- Affects Many People
Assignee: freebsd-doc (Nobody)
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Reported: 2017-12-22 23:11 UTC by ljuba.bsd
Modified: 2017-12-23 01:20 UTC (History)
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FDP Primer, Chapter 1, Section 1.1 Overview improvement. (3.06 KB, text/plain)
2017-12-22 23:11 UTC, ljuba.bsd
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Description ljuba.bsd 2017-12-22 23:11:33 UTC
Created attachment 189043 [details]
FDP Primer, Chapter 1, Section 1.1 Overview improvement.

FDP Primer, Chapter 1, Section 1.1 Overview contains a sentence "The Subversion package is needed to obtain a working of the documentation and generate patches with." which should be "The Subversion package is needed to obtain a working copy of the documentation and generate patches with."

Other changes included in diff are merely cleaning up badly formed lines to make _igor_ silent.

Proposed changes are tested locally, build works as expected.

-ljuba
Comment 1 commit-hook freebsd_committer freebsd_triage 2017-12-23 01:20:35 UTC
A commit references this bug:

Author: eadler
Date: Sat Dec 23 01:19:44 UTC 2017
New revision: 51332
URL: https://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/51332

Log:
  FDP Primer: add missing word; pet igor

  PR:		224531
  Submitted by:	ljuba.bsd@gmail.com

Changes:
  head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/overview/chapter.xml