Created attachment 189043 [details] FDP Primer, Chapter 1, Section 1.1 Overview improvement. FDP Primer, Chapter 1, Section 1.1 Overview contains a sentence "The Subversion package is needed to obtain a working of the documentation and generate patches with." which should be "The Subversion package is needed to obtain a working copy of the documentation and generate patches with." Other changes included in diff are merely cleaning up badly formed lines to make _igor_ silent. Proposed changes are tested locally, build works as expected. -ljuba
A commit references this bug: Author: eadler Date: Sat Dec 23 01:19:44 UTC 2017 New revision: 51332 URL: https://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/51332 Log: FDP Primer: add missing word; pet igor PR: 224531 Submitted by: ljuba.bsd@gmail.com Changes: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/overview/chapter.xml